The ending ties it all together well. And I agree with the mic drop line.
Regards James

Not a bad way to be. There’s always a bit of magic feeling to what we do.

this is beautiful I am way too arrogant when I write❤

You are full on magic in every way

are you around for awhile? If so can we talk on gmail?

I feel this…I don’t think I really weave my words on my own. I am but a conduit to jot down what comes to me in either a daydream or nightmare.
I really appreciate the brevity in your poetry. You leave us dimensions to visit in a short space of words.
j.

I feel like a child in front of the universe. Thank you for the support. One question do you share on writerscafe.org?

Unfortunately I think this captures the current feeling in the air a little too well.

hello dearest Joe this is powerful my husband and I were thinking of moving to the city and I warned my husband no talks of polictics because I fear in this day and age❤

“Lawfare is the prelude to warfare” It captures how division can eat away at freedom from within. A timely and sobering reflection on what it means to truly live free.

Listen to your feelings. Trust your intuition.

I find this piece mentally challenging in a good way.

Very thoughtful and reflective on the American society

Brutal honesty at its best. x

hello dearest Thomas this is heartfelt❤

Amen!

Muchly enjoyed .. but then I know you are write on point .. Neville

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

So accurate, so authentic, so true. Well said Thomas.

Thank you so much.

Thanks, my friend.

Wow this is so true great write

Thank you.