-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreFroward.I found the word highlighted in my Bible.I remember liking how it rolled off my tongue. And thinking about tongues,all the women I loved over the years came to mind.Red dresses dancingbetween shots of rock gutand sloppy bar bands. Wayward.Full of...
14 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you, my friend. I appreciate it.
-
-
![Profile picture of Neville]()
Brilliant .. sums it up perfectly .. Neville
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you Neville. I appreciate you.
-
-
![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
This is fantastic poetry writing my friend! Gritty, strong, like a shot of whiskey. Colorful, great story telling, and imagery. Great work.
John
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you. Much appreciated.
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Waw raw and I can see the imagery in this.
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you so much.
-
-
![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Goldenmyst said it accurately. I concur wholeheartedly.
But, thunderbird? My god, man. At the least Seagrams 7 !!! LOL
This is very good writing. A bullseye on a dartboard of a swanky bar life.
Awesome.-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
lol. Thank you, my friend.
-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Outstanding and real. Nice work.
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you.
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
I love how you wove it all together into a cohesive story. There’s an underlying homage to the women and their fire and marks left on you that ties this all together so beautifully. I can’t help but think you made a difference in their existence as well. Fire water or no, this one is brilliant
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you. I appreciate you.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
I like the way you used the age intertwined with what is happening to you.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
I love it, Brenda.
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously dearest Adagio ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Wally]()
wonderful work my dear crim. always aspiring.
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Wally it’s wonderful to see I hope you’re well thank you my friend ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Perfection is your middle name. Excellent. xox
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. By the way you forgot an r in your title. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
I know I just saw it lol I was so embarssed I type too fast thank you dearest Damian most graciously ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Beautiful work.
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously dearest Thomas ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
That last line had me sighing. Really nice work, Crimsin
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Fia good evening thank you lady most graciously I’m happy you felt this ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Amazing! Can feel every word in this poem. xo
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Keith I admit I am not always so appreciative ❤️hope you have a wonderful day…
-
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
A goody
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Thank you. 🙂
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Thank you Damian.
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
That is sweet. Can you imagine your heart beating hoping it was from that person.
-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
It would beat fast for sure. 🙂
-
-
![Profile picture of Styxian]()
I once found a folded up love poem along the side of a road. Perhaps someone has thrown it out the car window.
It was actually written really well. I wrote a reply to it, although I had no idea who wrote the first one, or who it was to. I just felt like it deserved an answer. Too bad they never knew that a writer had found their poem. It wasn’t written for nothing after all.
Your little poem here brings back that memory for me. So thank you for your poem, it too has meaning to us readers.-
![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Nice story. 🙂 Thank you for reading.
-
-
- Load More Posts
Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian