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Read MoreWhen she walks on by that is beautiful. With something about her, I cannot ignore. My eyes follow her blinklessly into blinding light. With something about her, I can gaze. Her perfect form eclipses the sunlight, and I am cast...
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Read MoreTears rain down from the heavensGuided missiles used as weaponsDesperately trying to warn usLosing our faith and lacking trustThe storm is raging as we self destructThe fire from his tears begins to eruptOur greed and lust for consumption Warnings...
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We as humans should care about the environment and each other but it seems that caring about the environment and each other is not our priority. It’s a shame.
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I agree..we should..but we do not value whats important..only what we consume..and the values we grew up with seem long gone
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Great polemic no doubt regarding the recent US attack on Venezuela.
I can’t accept that the bulk of American citizens would still vote for Trump and his Court Jesters.
To be fair, Trump is only the puppet.The puppet masters are the unelected, neo fascist multinational corporations running all western democracies.-
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While I agree the unelected neo facists are the corporations running the western democracy and they feed the war machine because it generates a ton of money for themselves and their ppl..I do worry there are still many Americans that will support trump and his jesters no matter what..no matter what actions or evidence is presented to them their opinions dont change..I don’t know what the tipping scale is for Trump supporters but I dont think we are there..unfortunately..its scary knowing more chaos lies ahead
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Politics aside, this is a well written poem with great flow and a spot on message. I can sense your urgency within it. But you didn’t lose control. Well done.
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Thank you for your respond..I appreciate you reading and commenting..glad you enjoyed
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Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you..I appreciate you as well
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Read MoreSmall,white ballerinas.In the air cold,divine.Is what snowflakes are. You play to pass the time.They gracefully move through the air.And land in a pile. White blanket,sun in the air.And they have a friendly smile.The air is their dance floor. Their destination is the...
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Aww would you eat the snow. This is so sweet
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I enjoyed this read. My favorite stanza is:
” Thousands of lives lived without you.
So I will cherish this only one.
For if I am reborn and you are not there.” -
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An age-old dilemma I’m afraid. Unrequited love, or at least attention. You write is a calm plea perhaps, yet we’ve all nodded our heads to your message.
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Nice take on the old battle of light and shadow. Not overdone, yet with plenty of detailed lines to make it strong.
well done.