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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreBefore dawn, Highway 6 bridge. Mallard ducks wobble across wet pavement. I scatter bread, grab my big black garbage bag, take a few morning swigs to knock off the shakes, vomit it back up. City sleeps, dumpsters smell of rot. I climb in, sifting through cat shit, discarded...
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Much appreciated.
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Another dark slice of the side of life most of us abhor and pretend isn’t there at all. It is so difficult trying to picture you there, my friend, so hard to think of anyone other than make believe movie made bums living hard, rough lives no real, educated man who writes so beautifully could possibly live among and be himself, hanging on to humanity by the slenderest thread. You show me parts of myself in these seedy climes, just another few tarifs or heists of my rent away from joining you on your morning quests. You bring tears to my tired morning eyes.
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Thanks, my friend. I appreciate it.
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Freaking great piece with the real life descriptions dude, tight work
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Much appreciated.
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“trying not to get hit by their apathy,
daylight swallowing my quiet survival.”That right there sums up so much in this world. Identity means nothing without a trendy label to too many. And those struggling to survive, invisible. The undecided dawn was one helluva exclamation point on the situation. Another solid piece of reality
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Thank you.
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Appreciate you cuz.
Damian
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreSome of you are having problems with publishing your work. We are aware of this and are working on it. Sorry for the inconvenience
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Thanks for the update, Fia. Appreciate you cuz.
Damian
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Wally wrote a new post
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Read MoreHe traveled across many universes Trying to find the one he had left behind Looking to catch the emotion in verses Versus the different paths that fate had aligned He entered through many doorways and portals Through every gateway and wormhole to explore With a...
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Very nicely done. The rhymes are tight. The story is well structured as well.
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Thank you so much Styxian. It’s my never-ending journey of telling stories in rhyme to engage the reader.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian. I’ve been working more on rhyme and meter as of late. Always appreciate your reads and comments.
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NAAJIR wrote a new post
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Read Morestrange it wasthe outcome...yeah?making covenant with the governmenta bureaucratic cabalpreaching change is gonna comechildren of lesser godskept you at odds pre-occupied slow cooked like that framed frog while you over-lookedthe hand up Mona Lisa's skirtbartering idealism for dirt sans Eden didn't see the...
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Your pen has power, Naajir. You weld it like a trident of discourse. Because you see that discourse and use it against itself.
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This was one of those vibes that started one way but ended up
on a more inspirational tone. I like those moments.
Big thx for such a profound comment, StyxianMuch respect
Naaj
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Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. This has a flow that would make great song lyrics. Nicely done per usual brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You read my mind in regards of putting it into song format. I’ve been in and out if Suno
and I like how they piece things together. Big thx for droppin by, Damian.Much respect
Naaj
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We read this thinking of all the people now wanting to claim innocence, The supporters of Nero and Caligua who supported the emperor even after discovering their madness. The mad rulers campaign on their sickness and still found themselves in power. There is no depth to the madness, you lose yourself using the normal routes to navigate. Tight
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Great analysis, bro. We gotta stay grounded in our covenant in times like this
Thx or droppin in.Much respect
Naaj
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write with precise imagery my friend. This was raw and real brother. Appreciate you.
Damian