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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
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I sit before you
Blank
Random thoughts
Incoherents sounds
Nothing
Absolutly
EmptyCandle lit
Shows shadow
Places to hide
AloneWhat is happening
I do not understand
I’ve scaled walls before
Beaten away the voidI dont like this
Alone
My thoughts
Have jagged teeth
Tearing at me
I hold it backI sit here b…Read More
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Thank you Crimsin. I appreciate you and thank you for your understanding.
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Mic Drop!
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Haha, Thank you Damian;)
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Chère F.,
My good intentions solution would be:
Choose someone who whispers in your ear how good you are how talented and how beautiful.When the balance shifts, build wall to keep the good feelings in. And you’ll be as OK as I see you. And let me tell you a little surprise: I’m not the only one who can’t wait to tell you.
Believe me!
Warmest greetings, Gus-
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Thank you Gus, I needed to hear that;))
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Maybe so, dear F.
But you so very much deserve it!
I send or sent (what do I know) love from a small tent in the south of France.
And the more I share it, the richer I feel.
Warmest greetings, Gus
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Excellent way to explain why walls are built, and then they wonder why they are so scared.
Nicely penned.
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Daniel Long and
Adelphina are now friends
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Depends What Matters…
I don’t know if it’s a society thing…
or what
but this standard that directs us to follow a specified path
you meet…you marry…pop out a few kids
never forgetting the coveted white picket fenceI have a question…
what if that pattern…
isn’t really one size fits all…I think of all the miserable…Read More
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Hi Willow, you have packed a lot into your poem. At its heart is the recognition of individuality, as opposed to individualism. We arrive in many different shapes and colors as well as temperaments. For me, it is a social matter, the traditions that arise out of society based on oppression, of class and social distinction and hierarchy, that…Read More
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I fear that we’re rapidly approaching that time when women and those of color have few rights again. The number of bumper stickers I’ve seen with “Make women property again” make me sick. And this country is terrifying me more every day. It’s time for big change indeed. Thank you, Curt
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) posted in the group National Poetry Month
The House Where the World’s Bugs Gather
April 28th arrives
as an infested house,
a structure trembling
under the soft, relentless weight
of everything that crawls,
buzzes,
flutters,
or insists on existing
in the cracks of the world.It is not one kind of bug.
It is all bugs,
every species the ending world
has ever whispered into b…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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hello beautiful Fia I am guilty of building walls I started doing it when I was a child really now it happens without me thinking and my personality just shifts…I feel your pain beautiful expression❤️