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Read MoreYou take thesmall pleasures whenthey come,like vanishing gnats.The black cat rolls onthe freshly vacuumedcarpet,reaching every spotand fiber, to satisfythe deep need for relief.My good friend died thismorning.Cirrohis--his lover became a killer.Motherfucker, I'm sick ofdeath.Neon orange sadness.Three beautiful orphans behind.The...
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Thank you.
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Haunting piece of poetry Thomas. Dark and claustrophobic. Wonderfully executed!
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Thanks, my friend.
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my condolences a very well written piece this pulls at my heart my son was 37 when he died that way leaving a family behind great write ❤️
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. I relate to this one. Sorry about your friend, that sucks. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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Ouch’ I’m guessing we all get duff days .. but this one takes some beating .. My sincere condolences Thomas .. just be sjure to write on brother .. Neville
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thanks, my friend
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Read MoreSea takes hold of me— a pale star through drifting fog, my chest becomes wind. Storm breaks in my bones, timbers groan, rain lashes skin, I am the vessel. Then the waters still, a mirror without a sound, my despair reflected. .
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Thank you so much for that warm welcome! You are much appreciated 🕊️🙏🏻
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🕊️🙏🏻
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Read MoreEvery dayanother bite,another piece of my being taken.Like cloth, It shreds.Through lightning bloodmy mind mere dustat end of day.Life - the vulture,with disdainful agilitychews slowly,rips at meready to feedon my carcass.
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Speaking truth my friend, this has layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for your input, Damian.
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Boom. You nailed it.
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ha-ha thank you, Thomas.
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I like this! I may expound on this in a different way.
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Beat my guest. 🙂
Thanks, Paula.
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Finished it. It’s entitled Alzheimer’s and it will be posted tomorrow sometime around noon. My first posting tomorrow and it will be dedicated to you.
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Then I’ll be reading it. Thank you, Paula. ; )
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You wove this metaphor brilliantly my friend. Great raw poetry that holds nothing back. Great work my friend.
John
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Read MoreIn my attic, in a dust-Leadon trunk,I found an old red jacket.It bore wrinkles and smelled of mothballs.In one pocket, I found an old smile.But in the burdensome years since I last wore it I found it no longer...
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I enjoyed this immensely.
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Thank you Peter.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate the comment, thank you.
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hello dearest Tim this is beautiful I enjoyed the metaphors here… I don’t know how to stop hoping no matter what I pray you find belief an understanding of God as I have found him truly to be I looked at church and never found him there… then my scope widened and I found him everywhere ❤️
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Thank you for the comment, Crimsin. 🙂
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Man, I love the part where you found an old smile. The whole piece is great but something about those two words together made me smile. And no, it’s not old! lol
It gave ma a feeling of nostalgia. Wonderful write amigo!
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Thanks so much Adel. :)))
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Powerful work.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Tim, this read like a man on a quest to find the joy he once had. You took this metaphor and flew with it my friend. I could visualize the old red jacket in the trunk and you finding it and looking in the pockets for what once was. Truly great work.
John
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Read MoreStress encircled her eyes. When any hope was hopelessand light-years away,she opened her dresser drawer. Beneath lengthypharmacy referralsand exponential credit card billsthe black metal trigger resembledthe color of a raven. At the speed of lightand with enough energyto cross the expanse of...
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No, hope, could not find a way out of everything.
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Sadly no. Thanks for the comment, Fia.
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It is sad but you ended it with a bang. I love that you used the word stardust!
Even though she was tortured, you made her sparkle at the end.
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Nice observation Adelly. Thank you for the comment. 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Not every write has a happily ever after. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m glad you liked it. Thanks Damian. 🙂
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Tim, this was softly explosive. Like a dream that comes true in a dark and sad way. Exquisitely written my friend.
John
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One hell of a write.
Go back to bed and rest.