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      a leafy bloom’s pledge

      “a leafy bloom’s pledge"   Firm will enters through hidden morphemes, a vow carried without leaf or bloom. Resolve bends but does not shatter, its path refusing the easy blossom.   Leaf trembles against the restless air, flower opens to a waning flame. Soil shifts beneath uncertain steps, and...

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      Ode to 3 Voices

        May 2017.The world went quietand I was in jail.Trying not to cry—I wanted to be in the skyor on a highway somewhere,when Chris Cornell leftthis earth,that hauntedsanctuary of a voiceburning through the speakerslike a bottle rocket,fighting demons in every...

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      • hello dearest Thomas I have come so far I can feel you there…I’ll meet you there alone…Robyn was beautiful always giving to others…congratulations on you sobriety I wish I could say the same it’s not in the cards for me and the dark is constant company ❤️

      • Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent tribute write my friend. We’re losing so many voices far too early, I feel this one. Congrats on three years of sobriety brother. Lucky for us, we walked away from that demon. But no one walks away unscathed, we carry those scars still. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Thank you. Much appreciated.

      • Robin was a hard blow to so many of all generations. When the darkness swallows them whole, it leaves us a little broken. This is an incredible tribute to those voices and a great example of your own. Those 3 years are a thing to be proud of, I know they can’t have been easy. Congratulations!

      • I can’t tell You how this touchs me personally… Profound, genuine, sincere and moving the innerself in a whole way. This is a true masterpiece not only as poetry, but as feelings and human nature. Thank You for writing and sharing this truly outstanding piece 🤍

      • Thomas loss was never painted more strongly with with such sad nostalgia as in this poem. Loved this and could feel it deep down. Because most of my old friend have passed on too. I miss them and see myself in your poem.

        John

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      Heartsongs⁓* (American Sestets)

            Heartsongs⁓*There came last night in melodya raptured song of mysterythat sang unto the soul.From in my heart a gentle breezehummed softly with resplendent ease,scrawled on a golden scroll.Dreamlike voices in ecstasybuilt chorals to intensity …sounds only...

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      • This is so passionate. Enjoyed this. Favorite line is “Dreamlike voices in ecstasy built chorals to intensity …sounds only lovers know.”

        • I’ve a theory, Fia 😏

          Lines of poetry that most appeal are those the reader has felt and most easily relate to … either that, or have fantasized and dreamed.💫

          I thought you might find a little bit of favor in this one.

          Fia, your reviews are always like a happy hug!
          Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard🙏

      • Form poetry is an intimidating prospect for undisciplined free-verse poets (such as myself) Impeccable structure that does not take away any of the emotion. I’d say you nailed this one perfectly. Plus, you used the word “gauzy”, and I’ve been a big fan of that word for the last few years now.

        • Hello, Benjamin 🙏

          It’s a distinct pleasure to meet you and to receive your graciously appreciative review for one of my humble pieces.

          If you’d the mind to, I’ve no doubt you could use my American Sestet format to compose a virtual masterpiece of your own, that every poetess and poet would envy … and, I must take issue with your comment, “for undisciplined free-verse poets (such as myself)”. I say this, because there’s nothing simple or easy about Free Verse poetry … in fact, due to its lack of pre-set structure, it’s one of the most complex and skill required of all poetic forms, when composed properly.

          Then, I thought seriously about whether to include the session on Free Verse from my group “Back to Poetry Basics” to explain why I said above, that “I must take issue with your comment.” And, decided, “Why not? It’s free and will exemplify exactly what I meant.”
          I would love it if you join-in with the group, too: https://starsrite.com/groups/back-to-basics/

          So, here it is:
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          SESSION THREE
          Wednesday, November 11th, 2025
          This session will be on the Free Verse form.

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          FREE VERSE

          Because its unrhymed without a set meter or syllable count, the Free Verse is considered the most versatile of poetic forms. But, to be powerfully effective, it must flow smoothly and is NOT a narrative or prose form … it must have a poetic voice, spoken with rhythmic word-flow, with thoughts, feelings, emotion, and expressions grouped into verses, with appropriate line-breaks and enjambments.

          “Properly” composed Free Verse poetry will display correct grammar, including capitalization and punctuation … in other words, composed in such a way that any reader can follow and understand what the author intends and wants them to grasp in rhythm, speed, mood, inference of thought, feeling,, meaning, and emotional timbre (‘tambor’ – voice quality, tone color, tonality, resonance, etc.

          The heartbeat of Free Verse is imagery, metaphor, poetic syntax, and poetic voice, well-placed line-breaks and smooth enjambments.

          
“Iambics” work well with Free Verse, too.

          
There is no limit to lines or verses, topic or theme, mood, or otherwise.

          (Free Verse example by one of my graduate students: her last name is coincidental … not a relative.)

          COLOURS OF LOVE

          “What do you think
          when you look at me,”
          you ask?

          All I can do is stare,
          teary-eyed,
          speechless,
          trying desperately
          to find adequate words
          in describing
          such a beautiful life-form
          standing before me.

          “I see colors of love,
          as I have never
          seen them before,”
          I finally say.

          “I see tangerine hues …
          fiery reds of new dawns;
          saffron of rising moons
          against star-sparkled
          midnight blue
          of nighttime skies.

          I see golden suns,
          silver glints dancing
          in softly beckoning eyes
          of …
          fervent lovers.

          I see rainbows,

          flowers – I see, colors
          laid at my feet
          when kismet
          first painted

          You ~
into my lonely
          black ’n white world.”

          Dorina Jolene Jenkins
          22 Nov 2012

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          We’ve covered a considerable bit, some of which you may already know and are merely brushing-up, while others are altogether new in the finer details of the Free Verse form.

          Questions or comments? Make them here so we can all share, or if necessary, message me anytime and I’ll get back with you asap.

          Lastly, write your own Free Verse poem from what you’ve learned so far. It can be about anything you conceive of. We can share them together next session and sort out anything that might be amiss … above all, “Enjoy!”

          We’ll see ya after tomorrow’s lesson … ’til then, “Keep Freeversing!” 

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          Thank you sincerely, Benjamin, for the honor of receiving your appreciated approval, praise, inspiring words in review, and expressed enjoyment of this original American Sestets piece.

          I like “gauzy”, too! ⁓ Richard🖌

      • Beautifully penned, Richard. A very passionate write indeed, nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

        • Many thank yous, Damian 👌

          It’s always a joy to have you select one of my humble pieces toshare, and to receive your gracious praise.

          “Happy Holidays 🎀 Syr!” ⁓ Richard🖌

      • Tremendous writing, my friend. Powerful.

      • Hoi hoi @Richard,
        Hope this finds you well?!

        I’m a Dutchman, and in the Netherlands we cherish our poems.
        Apart from the more or less serious/traditional poems (that I’m only vaguely interested in), we have the Hickeldy pickeldy (in English) or olleke bolleke (the same but in Dutch).

        Of the latter, I must have written hundreds of poems. Therefor, I am very interested in the verse form you pointed out.

        And I love the poem itself as well. In fact I love it a lot.
        Keep on keeping on.
        As Curtis Mayfield said.
        Kind regards, Gus

        • It’s an honored joy, Gus 🌿

          To receive such gracious words from a fellow poet who takes keen interest in poetic format.
          From some years past, I am familiar with the Hickeldy Pickeldy Dutch form, and (unlike you) have composed but a few, one of which I’ll post for your entertainment.

          I thank you most sincerely and appreciatively for your interest in my original form “American Sestets” … and, would be honored if you were to compose one of your own … we’ll call it a fair exchange, me with your Hickeldy Pickeldy, you with my American Sestets. 😃

          As Bob Dylan sang, too, in his “Tangled Up With Blue ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YwSZvHqf9qM ), “I’m keepin’ on keepin’ on”.
          Kind regards, in-return, M’New Friend! ⁓ Richard🖌

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      First Time

        First time I got laid,I was fifteen.Kim.Black hair and big breasts.I just knew I was in love.She fucked every one of my friends.My heart felt like it was hit by a truck.I wandered lonelyas the neon night. I wanted to...

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      SESSION SIX
      The “BI-TRILLETS” form.
      Wednesday, December 3rd, 2025

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      I had planned to teach this session on Meter, or more specifically “Poetic Meter”, which entails getting into some rather complex technical issues.
      But, since we’ve been rather saturated with technicalities of late…Read More

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