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Read MoreI failed her test.We were two equationsfrom the startwe just didn't add up. If my brain is travelingat 80 miles per hourand hers at 50,how long will it taketo determineour possible chemistry? She studied me,but couldn't findthe answer. Now I'm back,trying to...
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Force of attraction formula in physics.
F = G * (m1 * m2) / r².Force of attraction formula in humans
L= G * (m1 * m2) / r².Where L is Love
G is Gentleman
M1 is number of times he messed up
M2 is number of times she messed up
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing wordplay, love the whole equation vibe. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tim I absolutely loved this. This is a brilliant use of the math metaphor for relationships with women. Truly an enjoyable and amazing read for me tonight.
John
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Damn. This is next level. Mixing poetry AND math. Brilliant!!!
Much respect
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This is gentle and clever the way you turn numbers into feeling it lands with a quiet ache. I always can expect something fresh every time I go to the back of the book if you will…
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Read MoreI cuddled up witha metaphor that wascaught in the corner ofmy room.I dressed it in thesilk of kings, and fedit from the fracturedtrees of innocence.Low-hanging fruit ofdespair gets usevery time.
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This is awesome. You’re so talented.
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Thank you
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Great work, Thomas.
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Thanks Tim.
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Beautifully penned, Thomas. Magnificent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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Thank you so much.
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Read MoreWhat happened to your heart?It used to be so strong.When did these damn nightsget so fuckin longYou're my Lady of ashes,and I'm all burnt up.You threw me in the fire;And my soul has had enough.I've had enough...I've had enough,I've...
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So much sadness and longing in few words. Well written, brother.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. The longing is felt in your words, amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
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Thanks. Much appreciated.
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Thank you so much.
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I love the math component in this. Some things don’t always add up but we must figure out the equation:))