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Read MoreLove’s always been a tricky concept for me to articulate. The moment it depends on reasons, it stops being love and turns into an exchange,something that lasts only as long as the reasons do.Ask your partner why they love...
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Now that is a thought to ponder on. If they shrug it is unconditional love. very interesting
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Read MoreShe came up behind me as I was taking off my makeup, and wrapped her arms around my waist. “Vienes a la cama, Amor?” Are you coming to bed, love? I smiled and closed my eyes. She didn’t initiate often, but fuck. Just...
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Based on this artiusing piece, I think in my next life I’d like to be a woman.
Great write.
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Thanks Peter, it’s the fucking best.
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent storytelling per usual really love the layers in your writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. It’s so much harder for me to write this narrative voice, and I appreciate that you foind nuance.
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Stinking, reeking, sweating womanly sex – so hot my knees are trembling!
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Mine were too. WLW smells like gardenias and jasmine… fucking glorious shit.
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Gardenias and Jasmine! Aren’t you the lucky one, girl?! Cherish the moment! Harriet-Jacqui Furl writing as HJ Furl on Amazon.
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Why, why did this have to end? lol I know life continues but this is hot.
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I mean, we had to work. 🙂
When it was one of THOSE nights with the one who got away, it feels like it never ends… god above… it feels like eternity in every steaming breath. Smooth skin and soft breasts and held-breath cries… yeah. It feels forever.
Thanks for dropping in Fia and supporting me. I don’t know what I’m doing right now, but I’m appreciative to have space to stretch my fingers and figure it out.
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You are welcome to do that here. Betty
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What the hell?! You literally described Del. And in another subliminal way that I noticed, because I’m kinda like rain man sometimes. LOL. So what if I’m quirky!
BTW, if I was a female, I’d be lesbian. I get it.
Your erotica is intense and not pornish. That is because you are a skilled writer!
I’m still waiting for more of your heady writes. But I know you’re on a purge. So have at it. Thankfully you’re good at all subject matter.-
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Bro, when I said I’d fucking take your woman from you if you were an asshole? I MEANT it. I’d totally steal your woman from you. (She’s hot!)
Thanks. The intimacy is so, so different, and structuring it in a way that was less textbook and more opera is still challenging. I might write for my gay half for a while. (My straight half has had the shit kicked out of it for some years.)
I don’t know what’s next as Betty. I don’t know if she has much left in the way of heady writing. We shall see.
Love you bro. I mean, really. (Be good to your girl or else!)
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She is incredible. So I’m not an asshole just for her! LOL.
“Betty” needs to celebrate being Betty across a few topics, etc. You have a very human way with words that everyone can relate to, and wish that they themselves had the inner voice to get down in words. So embrace it all. You are very well rounded.
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Really love the go between you and Styxian, great commenting. The piece can’t be denied for it’s steaminess, it’s like watching a flick, tight
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Styx is seriously my brother-from-another-mother. Glad you dug it my friend. Really glad.
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Read MoreYour hands are a slow, deliberate scriptsnowing cold glass frozen in marroweach syllable, a fucking shardwhere my lips have beencarved into your flesh—up to my toesiesthe cunt has worn Into a hollow, seeping starepulsing for sharp kisses in the airyou...
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The dark makes me tingle, so good…all over me jangles, dripping.
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Read MoreYvonneIf you had told me, I would be in the arms of this man. This particular man, who made it a point of not acknowledging my existence. I will call you an absolute liar.You see, I'm not the typical...
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling per usual my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Chère F.,
Lovely to see you have posted again.And, while my tongue seems to have a will of its own, who needs Valentine if we can have this?
Also poem-wise, I’m hungry for more!
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Oh Gus it is coming. Thank you
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This is a very well told story, dear Fía. It awakens the curiosity of your readers and keep it up. I can hardly wait to read the sequel!
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Thank you, Elke appreciate that.
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Hahaha, tis is so real and we’re thinking you incorporated some truth in this, tight one Lady
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Haha no just my imagination. Thank you ME
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Kind of story I come back from sun basking in Gran Canaria for! Superb writing, Fia, and much enjoyed.
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Thank you for that H.J;))
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Heart-warming and affectionate piece.
Emotionally unraveling throughout.
I’m glad it had a sweet, happy ending.
I had a feeling that disaster might strike, but instead all safe and well. x
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Thank you Rosie, Maybe I will write something that has disaster in it. 😉
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Read MoreBlood and bad breath The taste of morning Blood and coffeeAnemic breakfast Blood and kissesDrowning in dreams Blood and bladesSink deep in flows Blood and loveA prisoner inside myself Blood and beerDespair to be savored Blood and silenceEmptiness thinks Blood and snowI...
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This drips with grit and shadow—each line a pulse of pain and dark devotion.
You’ve poured the body’s ache and the soul’s rust into a river of red, unafraid to bleed.
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Interesting observation my friend with some solid points as well. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian