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Read MoreDomainWe get it in downloads and write in clockwork elves Clockwork machines manifested from clockwork selvesSo many Dali clocks on So many shelves. How we made &Make. Letters to break the fetters and make The soul: Shake. The Earth: Quake.Writing-ignitinginShake n bake, baked. I want...
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Thank you Del…
Hoping to get back into the routine of writing…
Very much appreciated…
After I wrote this…
I was thinking about poetry and prose…
Rhyme and off rhyme…
Or like, in this piece, I feel this sort of
approach, with like…Internal rhyme and rhyme shifts…
Well I was just thinking how it effects
the senses…
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I’m digging the Dali within this. I can see the melting clock as I read this. Yet you’ve awakened that clock, for one last tock!
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Thank you Styx…
Very much appreciated…
Gotta love the Dali… 🙂
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Read MoreNot for Lulz for LightIt is a special kind of alchemy, followingsigns – To which – Most are blind. Drivenby vision. Possessed by mission, assigned.Mission: Divine. Decision, defined. Acrosspathways of a diamond mind to forever findPoetic skies, in which...
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This is well said. I hope humanity will wake up and see that we are here on this earth together so why go after each other?
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Me too, Fia, me too
Hugs
Jackie
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for visiting Damian
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Jackie
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Read MoreMost don't realize that we're just positive and negative energyHurtling through space and time in a giant atom as our penitentiaryWe have no idea that we have the ability to control the atom, space, and timeInstead of pairing up...
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very strong write. I love it. The fact that you built it up so much and yet carried the rhymes throughout, is quite an accomplishment actually. The message too, should be a mantra to all.
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We simply appreciate the read and comment dude, but so much of what we’re doing could be reversed and fixed. The crimes we’re committing against each other and to the planet could truly be healed if we chose to. Thanks dude
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Read MoreI'm still watching you make a fool of yourselfPutting skin tone and looks to high on the fucking shelfThe empire is crumbling, I can't make this shit any clearerThe end has arrived, it can't get any nearer Their hearts have...
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I’m digging the whole vibe/quake in this.
And I enjoyed the opening, the use of the work clockwork.
Like there are different gears that shift our writing – hence earthquake!
Just fantastic amigo!