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Saying that you’re beautiful is me simply stating the obvious. Whether it’s your smile, or the way your hair flows, or your aura of energetic personality, all of it, you are an incredible woman. I will never, ever, be bored around you.
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Of all your love poems this one made me get 🥹 eyed.
It’s beautiful and that is how you make me feel all the time.
I’m kinda speechless:)
Love you and all of your magical words babe.
Again speechless:)
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Read MoreCaress Cymraeg whispers - red, white and green - to stalk your neck and flower fragranceupon the hills of your skin Love bites will colour the braille of each lost village talking to another, semaphore, morse code, my mouth would swap conversation for kissing Snowdondia susurration between your lips Bible...
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I like how this started and went with a nice flow. The 3 am letter hidden in the duvet that is nice imagery
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Passionately penned, Ghosteen. Excellent write with amazing imagery my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreAnd then she said, after pretending to be a porn actress on a third-hand hotel mattress, “I like your poetry, but hate your poems” And then she said like a bride spitting through her veil “I take love where I find it” No one viewed my heart’s removal van driving baggage towards lighthouse-lights...
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Read MoreLooking in, looking outtell me, what love’s aboutCounting all the stars, missing onewhere is it, where’s it goneAnd you know I miss youit’s all I do, think of youremembering your touch, gentle windcoming and going, looking inLooking out, towards...
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You feel the weight of sadness in this one. pretend it is not a knock at a window. Shows how alone you felt
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The ending, I changed at the last minute, and you pictured it perfectly. Thanks for letting me know that it hits.
And you keep kicking butt!
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It’s just creative writing Brenda, I promise! I try to mix up the subjects and such. I don’t want to be too predictable!
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Hello Tim!
This is not current event material. I’m mixing up my subject matter here and there, so as not to be too typical, yaknow?
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Thanks Damian. Me and Del are good! I just like to take my writing in different directions, like most of us do. I’m always learning and adapting, I hope.
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But you are in my head when I write. When are you NOT in my head? LOL. I was going back and forth on this one, as far as how lyrical to make it. I forget what song I was listening to, that got me going on it. But eh, I’m leaving it as is for a bit. You know me!
And you know that I love you too babydoll. Smooch!
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Read MoreIn a bar's outdoor beer garden,patrons mingle, talk politics,and eat sausagewhile downing beerbeneath an old oak's shade. Among them standsa sultry young woman,accustomed to turning headswherever she goes. Beside her mother,she surveys the crowd,catching the familiar glancesof men who notice her. Then,...
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Haha this is a good one and I like how you end it with the old saying.
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I’m glad you liked it, Fia. Thanks. 🙂
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dearest Tim I hate women like that money grubbers trading their looks for cash prostitutes great write ❤️
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Thanks very much for the comment, Crimsin.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Another excellent write that speaks some truth my friend. Some marriages are more like business arrangements these days. Cold and transactional it would seem. Just my two cents brother. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for your thoughts, Damian. Always a pleasure to see you on my page.
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Tim you paint the scene and the sultry women with masterful brush strokes of description. This took me right into the scene so that I could see everything and the storytelling here is excellent. A really great poem that puts me right there and the slice of life here is tantalizing. Our former local coroner married a young lady who had a tryst with the pool boy and the coroner left his wife. As a woman told me he should have known at his age why she married him in the first place for his money. Loved this so much.
John
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Of all of your lovely love poems this one made me teary eyed 🥹.
It’s so touching and magical to me. I felt like a fairy princess reading this.
I love you and all your magical words babe.
I’m speechless! Kinda. Hahaha
Smooches!