Phenomenally penned, Tim. Another fantastic collection my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Tim I wonder besides rain what these poems have in them that weave them together there is something ominous I can sense… great write 💕

Superb flow.

Ahhh! 🌧

What could be better, My Good Friend Tim, than a captivating soliloquy of imaginative Free Verse poetry from the rainbow of your dancing pen, creatively presenting the wonders of “Rain” to fill and soothe our parched imaginations.

Nice rhymes ‘n imagery in Poem 1, and your artwork choice sets the perfect mood.
I enjoyed each offering … particularly:

“For an hour, the sky recites
poems from heaven
and I listen…mesmerized.”

Outside my window, rain’s forecast today … I’m keeping my best umbrella and shiny red boots handy!
Good stuff, Syr Poet … much enjoyed, as usual! ⁓ Rascal🖌

150/100

Quite a collection, Sir Tim.
Especially the woman in the window piece. Yet, the beginning obviously draws the reader in, with the vivid imagery. Well stocked stack of art, this.
And good to see you here.

You keep hitting them out of the park. And I go flying with that ball every time! Gotta watch that hook…it’s a killer. Another thought provoking, rile-me-up piece, my friend

This reminds me of social media’s control over youth. They can’t think for themselves anymore being they’re led and pulled in by algorhithms. Good one Damian.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love this, Damian. You are a man of honor.
I want to bookmark this, but it won’t let me.

Perfect reasons to do what you do. I love it. :))

You are an honorable writer, Damian. The freedom to write and express is a gift and you’ve shown you are a prolific poet who many can relate to.

damn. this hits.

Boom!

And this is why I read every word you share. Kindred. That’s all I got, my friend 🙌

Short and sweet but that’s not all .. I imagine also true .. Neville 😎👍