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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously I’m happy you felt the magic❤
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First line fifth stanza, did you mean “summon”?
This was fascinating…and as Tim said…very spooky.
I love the idea of “stalking my vision”!
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hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously yeah I meant summon…lol ❤️
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Powerful work. You nailed it.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
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I hadn’t anticipated needing to return so soon to address this, but it’s necessary to clarify—once again—what this platform will and will not tolerate. To ensure we are all on the same page, please read the following carefully.
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Read MoreThe Three C’s of StarsRiteCommunity, Comradery, and CommentsWriting, putting the work in & finally posting so others can read it can be a bit unnerving. One of the goals of StarsRite is to become a community that communicates!Poetry is...
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Fia,
Hmmm. Just curious, Fia, are you an administrator here in Stars?
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Yes, I have partnered up with Stars Rite.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
This is a shortcut for those who want to change their work completely but will have to wait 24 hours before they can post again.
DON’T DELETE!
Go to the dashboard and go to the work you want to remove. Use the pen and go to the body of the work, remove it, and insert new work. Change the title and tags if you need to.
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Read MoreHow can I competeShe had trained you for her desiresShe tells you to count before you beginYou take deep breaths, trembling You either fear heror you desire her Lust or disgustRides you hard She tells you she wants you to play something...
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I love this piece. You create an excellent and interesting metaphor and you carry it through from beginning to end.
It really works and we feel the relationship between the poem’s subject and the piano.
nicely done, Fia.
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Thank you, Jacob ;))
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Fia….I thought it was more about a femdom sorta thing….still good either way.👍
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Haha..well you never know when I could pop a poem like that out. Thank you, Peter;))
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I just can’t imagine any hot blooded music loving fella NOT enjoying this & DEEPLY .. Bravo Mistress F .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville.(big smile here);))
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excellent write
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Thank you, twoffthythree ;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Music is a seductive lady, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;)) Music is exactly that,
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Fia this was smoking. I love piano music and this is one of the most creative poems on seduction of a pianist I have read. I felt the flame of his helplessness because her womanly powers. Sizzling.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Spooky and spellbinding, crimsin. I like it. You capture the magic within the spell. 🙂