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thank you graciously beautiful Fia I just love him ❤️
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Fantastic!
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio for being here my attention in the site was waning due to lack of interaction… I appreciate you deeply today ❤️
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I love the rock god!!!
So many great lines in this but I absolutely love flame of fright!!
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hi beautiful Adelphina thank you so much I felt like I was hitting my flow by that time I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Always a great write when music is involved in the story. Excellent work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian yes he is an inspiration thank you for digging it ❤️
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I love the commanding voice in this poem! It isn’t a passive admirer; she’s a “Mistress,” an active conjurer of lust. The use of words like “Hexaba,” “culted lust,” and “sanctify the rite with orgasm” is brilliant for creating that sense of forbidden, consuming desire. A passionate wicked piece.
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hello lovely poetess good evening thank you graciously for the love on this write ❤️
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Rob Fuckin Zombie Brenda!! Have you ever listened to White Zombie’s early material from the 1980’s? I personally think it’s horrible. Check it out if you haven’t. Awesome piece of writing. Love the chick…Sexy!!
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Really intense images.
I definitely saw a scene of the occult unfolding in these words.I both admire and fear witches.
Regards James
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he dearest James good morning thank you and don’t worry I’m not a practising witch though magic seems to come naturally from me have a good day today ❤️
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Read MoreArrived hand in handNo standing in line Got our backstage passLet’s make it lastNo stadium seatingOutside beneath the stars. Music’s ready to start We’re downing crown & cokeHe steps a little closerI’m moving a little slowerNah we should go fasterBaby...
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Fine, Metallica it is, when next we bed together. What!
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Promises promises.
But I prefer to listen to Taylor Swift! Hahaha
As long as I’m with you it doesn’t matter:)
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this is badass beautiful Adelphina and we both about rockers tonight… this is really cool ❤️
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Thank you Crimson! My first concert was Aerosmith.
When the song Train Kept A Rolling came on the crowd went crazy!!
Left a lasting impression.Thank you for stopping by lovely:)
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Haha this is so cool. I can not tell you how many mosh pits erupt at the last Metallica concert I went to. From opening bands
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Hahaha. I just moved out of the way. lol.
I love all the anarchy of it. Music has a way of taking you there!!!
Thank you for the snaps!! Woop Woop!!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! Gotta love a musical write that appreciates the mosh pit! Excellent work my friend. I knew Mark would bring up Sabbath! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Of course he’d bring up Sabbath. Hahaha
He’s not a swifty fan, so I had to tease him about it. lolThis was a fun write.
I had the whole scene in my head playing out.Thanks for your snaps amigo!!
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Girl, this has so much spirit in it. Sometimes the “just for fun” ones actually light up the room. Big smiles all around on this one.
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Hi Willow!! Long time no see chica:)
I’m so happy you stopped by for a comment!
This one kind of wrote itself. I love when that happens. That high is addicting! lol
And that it made you smile is a bonus:)Thanks for stopping by!
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Read MoreWake up in the morning,with one goal in mind.How to feed my babies,without committing a crime. Everyone sees,But can not imagine.How easy it could be.How can this life happen? Never wanted a picket fence,or a house with a yard.All I could...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, I felt the sting of your words. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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We do what we must. Well, the good ones do! Like you.
Speak your words, Fia. Take a bow and some praise. It ain’t easy out there. Luckily you’ve discovered the therapy of ceative writing. It DOES help. It can save souls, if we trust ourselves to focus on hope.
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Thank you, Styxian;)) We must focus on hope.
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Man. I can relate to this. Not just myself but with my friends and family.
There is no telling where I’d be without my mom. She is my rock.
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Thank you, Adel. It’s hard but worth it;))
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The kids are everything. And if they’re not…something ain’t right. Felt this one in my maternal DNA.
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Thank you, Willow. They are everything.;))
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Whatever it takes!
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Thank you, Paula. you are right.
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Life can be cruel and unfair, so I thank God for mothers like this. It is my great hope that their sacrifices will be rewarded–if not in this life, then the next.
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Thank you, Sam. That is sweet;))
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Life is a fight. You have invoked a great feeling of grit and determination.
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Thank you, I needed to hear that today.;))
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I felt this deep in my marrow. Your dedication to those children renewed my faith in humankind. The struggle to keep your children fed and housed moved my heart deeply. This is truly one of your very best poems. It speaks to me of a mother’s love and her oh so protective spirit t keep her children safe, healthy, and well. This is much more than a poem it is a living breathing testament to a mother’s love. I loved this so much.
John
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Thank you, you think it’s one of my best.. appreciate that.
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Rock on, Love this crimsin