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Thank you for taking time to read and comment M.E!
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Beautifully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Nice rhythm and cadence, it has an anthem feel. Incredible words my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work.
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Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)Just an amazing piece of work, girl.
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hello beautiful Meg good afternoon thank you graciously for such a great review 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good afternoon dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Amazing piece Crimsin!
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hello good afternoon dearest poet thank you graciously 💕
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You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!
Naaj
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hi there dearest Naajir good afternoon thank you graciously for a lovely response 💕
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Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you for such a beautiful comment 💕
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CasketSharpe wrote a new post
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Read More“In the sixty-nine position they were passionately sucking and lickingTasting the last drops of pee from earlier while pissing, “She watched him shake it two times followed by a flushThe same for him as she toilet papered her...
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Oh, the force is strong with this one.
C’mon and plug my Darth hole, Mr. Casket…I’d love to give you a splash of sunshine
HOT AS ALWAYS!
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May the force be in you with the golden lightsaber.
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Oh wow, I like this! You picked a great beat for the lyrics. I’m like neon after listening to that!
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Thank you! Happy to make you glow haha.
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Nicely done, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow, thank you Damian. That really means a lot to me!
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I loved the last line. It reads like a bang to my heart. A heart touching piece. Well done. “)