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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously have a great night 💕
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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
Daniel
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hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously for the love on this write 💕it is deeply appreciated…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you pardon my tardy response I appreciate you 💕
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Read More...In Pink SatinTo the tune of...NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN (Moody Blues)--------------------------‐Femboi in pink satin...with pearls in hiz ears...motioning deftly...to the other sweet dears!He sees hiz beauty...but thats only hiz eyes...all the cis people...see a rainbow disguise!There's no longer a...
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Excellent!
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Read MoreA FINAL 24 HOURS WITH BOBBY MCGEE-- Janis Joplin is my favorite singer, a big sexual fantasy and her song. "Me and Bobby McGee" is one of my favorites.In the song: she and Bobby stop traveling together near Salinas....
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No one had the tonsils that Janis had. Love it.
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Girl beautifully written, I could picture it.
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Read MoreAt Twenty-five (For Janis Ian)Listening to Janis Ian's AT SEVENTEEN, I wondered where the girl in the song would be and how she would feel just a few years later? So, I wrote...AT TWENTY-FIVE (Dedicated to Janis Ian)It was long...
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Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well?I’ve been reading your writes with very much pleasure.
Even our musical tastes seem to have parallels.
The first Verve and Capitol LP’s by Janis Ian are still proudly in my cupboard and on my record player.
If you want to have the Janis Joplin recordings in Het Concertgebouw in Amsterdam, please let me know.I’ll PM you for the rest.
Please keep those writes of yours coming.
Kind regards, Gus
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This is amazing. Love the lyrical poetry and the meaning behind it.
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Lots of truth to this, but not all. I know the trophy wives. I had crushes on them in High school. Now their married to powerful men. Life is an odd thing sometimes.
My last comment for you. You’re very talented, good luck with your writing. 🙂
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Read Morereckless understanding, I love painfinding pinpoints of nerves and applying pressureit helps me focus on the deeper things the world spins and I realize I am a part of the mother... Earthevery fiber of my being feels my sibling's painas...
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Every one of us has the power to heal & to harm within us. It’s which course we choose to follow that separates the healers from the rest. Beautiful, Brenda 🧡
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hello lovely Willow this is true it is always my intent to make things nicer it doesn’t always go that way no matter what sometimes thank you for the love on this 💕
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Even with faith we will still struggle. I guess pain is a part of life when it comes. For many, faith has its benefits and joys. For others it’s a fantasy made up by humans. I suppose our minds and how we think plays a big part.
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my faith perhaps is not as strong as others though I do know God I struggle with suffering thank you for your thoughts 💕
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Great write Brenda.
I now realise that pain is quite different from suffering.Most, if not all, our suffering arises in the mind…..
that’s also where peace hangs out.
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hello dearest Benny my mind cause me to hurt with the way I perceive the world… I watch the news and ache with the pain of my brothers and sisters…there is an unrest in me that doesn’t understand such mind scarring events what is the nature of that? thank you for listening 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate you 💕
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hello lovely Mary good evening thank you beautiful lady most graciously for being so kind 💕
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