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Why Peter?
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I’m glad you asked.
I liked it because it reminded me of me, though I don’t have any imaginary friends.I liked it even more because it revealed another side to Paula.A softer,more introspective,less brutalized and probably more honest Paula.
Of course, I could be totally wrong,it could be another fictional piece from you…..
Have a nice day.
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My last one about a vulture echoes your thoughts, minus socks.
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Socks has been mentioned a few times.
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Read MoreIndulging in the flash, caustic symbolicNo barriers block my path, of hatred guided furyTo escape this mortal life, an underworld destinyObscene seed to mutilate, this religious tyranny Make, make them die...Make, make them die...SLOWLY!! I am called Pariah, bathing in sinBring...
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That’s brutal. Were they Amazonians?
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European cinema when this was made followed no rules. The American audience of today would cringe and have a seizure watching horror from Europe during the 70’s & 80’s. Watch the film. It will answer all of your questions. Happy Halloween
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You bring this to life with your imagery.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciated!
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, intense movie. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes it is my friend. Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreIn a camp not far from hereOn the other side of the lakeEverything burnt downNothing left but the ruins Night has fallen, Light the firewoodGather all the children, Raise Your ShearsIcarus burns, As Cronus feedsThe Awakening, The Conjuring Faceless creatures with...
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What a write! Now, I want to watch the movie.
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Awesome! Check the film out. A young Jason Alexander from Seinfeld is in the film. Thanks M.E
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The end alone makes the hair on my neck rise.
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Cool! Thanks Fia!
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Look up the documentary called Cropsey. It’s a true story about a guy named Andre Rand who worked at a notorious state school that was supposed to take care of children with mental disabilities called Willowbrook. Instead, through corruption, it allowed them to be abused in the worst way.
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YES! Familiar with Cropsey. Great doc. Thanks for the info & feedback.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend you always deliver. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man. You rock!!!
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Read MoreWhat the hell is this place?Elitist PsychotherapyPseudo Science sorceryInto the beyondWhat's the shape of her rage?Psychoplasmic therapyAnother Theater of PainFamily Tree Reborn Beaten to death, covered in bloodThey came without warning Demonic cratures uncagedManifest through inner rageDeformed children retaliateHammer Smashes FaceRabid...
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This has unbidden murderous intent. This is a good piece
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Thank you Fia. Appreciate it
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More
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