-
![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
Paula Jobi wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreFART CORNER I worked in a small print t-shirt factorywhen I was thirty. The owner, who didn'tdo any work, would drop in several timesa day just to try and catch us slacking. There were four other girls and one dude.Sue was...
2 Comments-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
I loved reading this. It somehow scratched an itch I couldn’t reach haha. Thanks
-
![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
Paula Jobi wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreAlzheimer'sDedicated to Tim (TIM-BLOOD) whosecomment led to a comment back...and an idea:----------Grady didn't like being confused.He did not remember the nameof the man standing before him.The man said, he was his son Barry.1...2...3...4...5. Grady could count.He remembered the first...
2 Comments-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Wow! I’m speechless. My father died of dementia and this is a bit scary to read being I can relate to it. Noy only in what I saw from my father but others around him during hospital and rehab visits.
I’m glad you didn’t leave. You’re too good to hide your writing.
Thanks so much for the dedication, Paula. 🙂
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is good. My friend’s mother has dementia, and it breaks her heart to see her that way.
I am also glad you did not leave.
-
-
![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
Paula Jobi and
Tim are now friends
![Profile Photo]()
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you so much Fia! 🙏🏻
-
-
![Profile picture of FlatDaddy]()
This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you FlatDaddy! I wanted to write something fun and light. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
-
![Profile picture of FlatDaddy]()
Enjoyed it? I jumped up and kissed the screen! Okay, I didn’t do that, but I could have. Just marvelous work.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you so much Damian 🙏🏻
-
-
![Profile picture of redzone]()
FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!
Curt
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Hey there Curt! Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙏🏻
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Superb work. Powerful.
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you for your kind words Thomas!
-
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
The voice in our head, the legions that rule can take over if we’re not careful. I fight my own war when negative self-talk invades.
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Tim I am fortunate actually it took many miracles to get me to this age so many brushes with death…nature is beautiful to look at I guess I just have to remember my time will come no matter where I am and all I can do is do my best until then I am just feeling my mortality thank you my friend ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Vivid and sharp. Fantastic work.
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good morning dearest Thomas thank you graciously for the understanding and lovely comment ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
- Load More Posts
Stars Rite a free online self publishing & social platform. A place for writers & readers to connect. Read Write Publish Stories Poetry Articles & Books. Create Ai generated covers for your stories & poems.
Copyright Stars Rite 2026
hahaha, good one. Had it been the time of covid you’d have a good reason to wear a mask.
I’ll never look at mustangs the same again. 🙂