Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a great musing, always dig the musings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian. 😊
Chocolate wine strokes again. My friend

Those hands should go to jail!!

I think we all hope to be remembered by those we interact with. Maybe keep a part of us alive. Great ink

Great! Last line brings it home. Nice work Fia..xo

Thank you, Hamid. I appreciate you saying that;))

Forgotten memories that echo, washed away in the dark froth, staring. Fia, this poem is almost like what I write hahahaha. It short, the imagery, delivers a quick punch 👊 👏 the way poetry should be! Bravo!

This poem sent me back to medieval times and back through a projection of Se7en. A Well written poem!

Slipping through the shadows again with this one. I always have to give these a second read before I can find words

Fantastic work.

Brilliantly penned, Naaj. This is what I call bringing it my friend. The flow is effortless. Appreciate you.

Damian

Always inspired by your commentary. hun
Big thx for the support

Naaj

Thanks Duende!! Always inspired by your observations 😎😎