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Benjamin Scraps posted in the group Music is Art
when that doctor asked me “son, how’d ya get in this condition?”
I said “hey sawbones, I’m just carryin’ on an old family tradition”![Profile Photo]()
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thank you graciously Rosie and welcome ❤️
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hello dearest Naajir I’m sorry I missed your comment thank you graciously yes prayers ❤️
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Read More~roar~ it always begins: again,rusty tongs clutching a wet worm suctioned from the womb through the dustof an earthly tomb by red hands into blue crownslearning to hide from the haunter of the dark a divine spark ceding shrilly echoes maintaining stern remembrance of misplaced lessons and an unforgiven foolishness puncturing...
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The way you structured the poem it looks calm then increases with intensity just to calm down again. There is so many twists and turns in one life that it is impossible to get the nuance of it. Between the government and the churches and the societal acceptance of things that should not be accepted. Very interesting write
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This one hits like a freight train of memory, madness, and raw observation—gritty, sprawling, alive with every sense screaming at once.
I love how it doesn’t just tell a story; it drags you through the chaos of life, pain, and revelation, leaving you dazzled and unsettled in the best possible way.
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Read MoreI'm dreaming today, floating through the daydiscovery in a smileyou conveyed your beauty to meand I can't stop myself, I feel the eurphoria of the momentsecrecy in an intimate thoughtI'm not sure you meant to tell mesexy man your...
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I like how you put in there I am not sure you meant to tell me because sometimes things slip and they were never meant to be said out loud. Lovely
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hello beautiful Fia thank you and yes they do sometimes with nothing more than a look ❤️
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eternally lovely, your poetry, HJx
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thank you graciously lovely poet ❤️
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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Simply sexy and classic
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thank you graciously dearest Naajir I feel bad I thought you all were ignoring me when I’ve been missing your comments thank you my friend ❤️
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreAnother spirt in a quagmire Selling off dignity just to get by Inflated egos that conspire Adding layers to a perpetual lie Sycophants always fall in line Empty vessels lacking a spine This world so full of sorrow Throwing obstacles in the way All I’m asking of...
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It is a bit musical. I wish for a better day, each and every day. That deer lost in headlights is so true
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A lot of us do wish for better days, that’s for sure. It has a musical feel is on point, it pretty much demanded to be that way, I just followed along for the ride. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I agree.
Thank you for putting it into words so eloquently.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Got my foot tapping away from the off to the end and back again .. Nice one too sir . Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does have a bit of a rhythm. Thank you for your continued support kind sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how this feels angry and tenderly thought at the same time. I like that hopefulness in the dark
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian the fire in the eyes of those zealous followers of the pied piper elevated to guru status is painted in your poem with fire and smoke. Truly a smoking great poem that is as strong emotionally as it is rhythmically. You have real talent my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really loved the way you described the write in your eyes my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I don’t think I’ve seen subterfuge used in poetry before and you made it fit and feel perfect.
I think many of us are feeling the same way, especially with the way the world is going.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like using odd words or hardly used words from time to time. When I can make them fit of course. lol. The world is very fragile at the moment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Captivating, spiritual and unraveling.
A pleasure to read.