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May 7, 2025

When the sky criesI feel its tearsRollingRolling down my face.Heaven weepsLeaving me in its wake.Can’t you see my tearsMy tears falling for you?The sky it poursCos darlin' we are through!He was my soulNow my soul didn't matter.I had no...

13 Comments

Willow
1 year, 5 months ago

Crying in the rain was always my safe space. Tears aren’t noticed there
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  I agree. It also feels like you’re not crying alone. Thank you Willow
M.E
1 year, 5 months ago

The rain might our hidden space to cry without being noticed, but, also its washing the sorrow and tears away. May it be a new chapter.

A heartfelt write, Fia! I loved it! “)
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Thank you, M.E ;))
CasketSharpe
1 year, 5 months ago

Beautiful with so much meaning.
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
Sam Nash
1 year, 5 months ago

Rain rain go away
I will wipe your tears away
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Thank you, Sam;))
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 5 months ago

Beautifully penned, Fia. Felt this one my friend, a phenomenal write. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Thank you so much Damian;)
Fia Naturie
1 year, 5 months ago

Thank you, Dragon-Fire;))
Pandy
1 year, 5 months ago

A beautifully bittersweet write. I love a good rain and love a good cry in the rain too. I used “stars cry” in something before, and I like the idea of bringing elements into writing. I bet more await from you too..
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 5 months ago
  
  Thank Pandy zipped love the elements and how they mimic emotions

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