When the sky cries
I feel its tears
Rolling
Rolling down my face.
Heaven weeps
Leaving me in its wake.
Can’t you see my tears
My tears falling for you?
The sky it pours
Cos darlin’ we are through!
He was my soul
Now my soul didn’t matter.
I had no control
No control over these feelings
As the rain began to scatter.
Let the sky weep –
Let it weep for me.
Crying in the rain was always my safe space. Tears aren’t noticed there
I agree. It also feels like you’re not crying alone. Thank you Willow
The rain might our hidden space to cry without being noticed, but, also its washing the sorrow and tears away. May it be a new chapter.
A heartfelt write, Fia! I loved it! “)
Thank you, M.E ;))
Beautiful with so much meaning.
Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
Rain rain go away
I will wipe your tears away
Thank you, Sam;))
Beautifully penned, Fia. Felt this one my friend, a phenomenal write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thank you so much Damian;)
A sentimental and sad poem, Fia. Like a song, I hear the minor chords in every word.
Thank you, Dragon-Fire;))
A beautifully bittersweet write. I love a good rain and love a good cry in the rain too. I used “stars cry” in something before, and I like the idea of bringing elements into writing. I bet more await from you too..
Thank Pandy zipped love the elements and how they mimic emotions