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Read MoreHow can I miss you? When you never go away Water’s wet sky is blue Perpetual victim falls prey Outside in the distance A stranger lies in wait Steeped in persistence Always guarding the gate When did I get wise? Is the proper question As soon as a crow...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I sometimes have that effect, it’s just the lyricist in me. lol. I always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha great end there, friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked it as well. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Anything is on the table, maybe even spoken word. Never say never. The song I’m working on, I literally had to start writing lyrics to it. None of the old words were fitting the vibe. Also, I haven’t tried to write a song for many summers now. I kinda forgot sometimes the music leads the dance. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I remember this piece. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoy it now. Nice Damian.;))
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool! Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Something tells me this is so good .. I got a foot that can’t stop tapping .. 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreits just the way it is its just the way it is its just the way it is its just the way it is its just the way it is its just the way it is Until it isn't.
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Who decides when it isn’t? Is there a voting process? Or do we just say screw it & flip the status quo? I like the powerful simplicity of this one
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Thanks for reading.
It’s more about accepting the present moment.
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I tend to say that when I see that there is no other way. Nicely done.
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I thought I was you were going in to a Bruce Hornsby song ” That’s just the way it is. Some things will never change. That’s just the way it is. But don’t you believe them”.
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Thanks Fia and Alexandria for reading and taking time to comment.
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Read MoreHow much I missto moss in loveholding the moldto gorgon stonea lifetime ago, thisancient road.Horizons beammy wanderlust dream:I am dim of years away from the final dandelion blaze,still sleek from behindwith the Sun going down‘til morning lurksto hone the worm& I (...alone, at night, aloof...
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Beautifully penned, Benjamin. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can see why it was nominated. It has a dreamy and faraway quality to it.
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I always think unicorn is code for a secret society this made me feel God himself was talking to me just beautiful…
I brow my spells
in leafy black-green
where sullen moons
sulk in pretty-pinklove it 💕
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I was raised around poetry books, and my dad liked to dabble in it late at night. My oldest sister too, had books around, and hers were more what developed my tastes. Like this write of yours. It reminds me of old Dylan. I don’t know why. yet that’s a good thing to key my old memories of reading his stuff.
You sir, are a poet. Not just a writer. an actual poet. And that is a very good thing.
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Read MoreWine Bearer of the Caravanserai Her eyes peer like mirror poolsIn the garden of the Taj MahalWhere the light of her soul shimmersIn reflections of the stars in the skyOn the forever bend of the moonbeam Silk RoadLeading like a...
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Somewhere history and romance meet. A finely penned travel…thanks for the drink!
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Thank you so much Benjamin! This is the first poem of the romantic historical quality I have written this year. I am very grateful for your words.
John
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Dear D,
You still got it. An incredible meter. Made me want to sing this. The imagery played in my head of a dark bus stop. Why? No clue. But the players in this piece for me, were intertwined. Trying to run but wanting to stay. I have a longer version running in my head but I’ll spare you the directors cut😊
Wonderful write. H🌷