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Read Moresomethin’ bout the way she movessubtle yet so attractivethe innocent way her body groovesshe’s a hurricane burning radioactiveseductive eyes that mystifymakes you wanna fucking danceshe’s the spider, yeah you’re the flycaught up in a web of circumstance… don’t turn your...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That she was, her coordinates were lost in the late 90’s. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s high praise, and good company. What a lovely comment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well through GarageBand and Logic Pro, I’m working on that. lol. The problem with not being able to play an instrument, is that it only leaves a few options. So I’m working on a solo album to give these old lyrics a home, there will be new lyrics as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with lyrics my friend. I plan on this one making the cut, I’ve always wanted “Wicked” to have music again. It had music in 97, but it was never recorded. Thanks for your continued support it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s the theory.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I try, I always write to the beat in my head. Maybe a strip club, or some other place where human beings gather. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
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Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
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hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
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Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
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hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
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Fia Naturie and
NAVINA are now friends
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Dude the pic alone deserves a host of comments, there’s nothing wrong with letting it mature a little. Tight work
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You so have to watch out for those old ones. They can put some shit on you.
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Alexandria wrote a new post
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Read MoreNot really sure how to feel about it. There's something moving in the air. I hear it like a syncophant song, wondering if I do or dare. Accusatory words written in code still crush the heart of the strong. If you're the one being bowed...
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Powerfully penned, Alexandria. Excellent write my friend, love the layers in this. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I appreciate your support.
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Brava! That last stanza blew my mind!
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Thank you, Willow. I admire you as such a strong woman. 🌾🕊️
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This screams with such a powerful quiet strength and says so much with a surprisingly few amount of words.
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Thank you so much. 😊🙏
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Superb work.
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Thank you so much, Thomas.
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Always remember. It takes strength to be gentle and kind.
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More please! I understand this well. Slight empath – had to be able to read a room to survive. I can feel the hate and the love and ALWAYS know when to leave.
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This poem makes me think of several things at once. A relationship in which one partner tries to dominate. The other wants an equal split or a literal split.
In a house, the rule has to be balanced. A back and forth, not all take and no give.But this also can relate to the current political situation. The one seeking power and crush all in his way. We don’t want to be ruled like that from that house, either.
This is good stuff…Opening the doors to varied interpretations allows readers to see what they will for themselves. And that is good poetry.
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We’re moving in the same direction S …
Fear not
You’ll know when it’s right
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Chère A.,
Hope this finds you well?!Over here it is 7 in the morning and I played our coop on earphones.
We’re trekking again.This beautiful poem of your slipped through the cracks. I’m really sorry for that.
Cause I remembered your remark of you being on StarsRite too.
I was brought up with the ‘if a girl says no, she means no’ principle. So, if you want to write only one poem, I have to settle for that.But I hope that I can lure you to write a poem again!
Our coop drew 4.685 listeners* so far, so may I hope for another one? In NL*
Anyway, I wish you a beautiful Sunday.
Warm regards, Gus
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That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville