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Read MoreWhen you announce that you're coming to dinner, the hosts should be prepared. Seeing that his death is the center attraction of the meal, I assumed that I will not be greeted appropriately. I went home to change into something...
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Right. Thank you, Tim;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling as always my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Magnificent storytelling Fia. Succulent!!
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Thank you, vision. I am gonna try gore for the ending
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Blade vibes.
I was emersed from the start.
regards
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That is such a compliment. I love Blade
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Read More5.33 amback deckcup of teabirds callingno windfruit bats returning home8 billion human beingsso very few experience these moments it really is just dumb luck no God involved.***************************Quote from Stan Gramt in this mornings paper:As a society, as a species, we are...
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There is no future in the past. Only lessons. Nice one
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Thanks for your thoughtful comment.
The only real problem with AI is, that it makes the truth almost impossible to discern.Seeing used to be believing but not anymore.No doubt, the powerful and the wicked will use AI for any other reason than to create poetry etc.💋💋💋💋
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Read MoreCASSIE THE WHORE Cassie was a fourth generation whore.It didn't offend her. It was her life.She embraced the empowermentif being able to set a price on her body. She was able to charge more than her sister, mother and granny. Cassie...
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Good story for a movie…..
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The house was torn down about 10 yrs ago. The funniest person I saw go in and out looked like Colonel Sanders with the white hair and clothes.
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I agree this could be done as a movie. Good write
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Paula, this is such a great story. Would make a perfect screenplay for a movie, I agree with the others. Actions packed, and uninhibited story telling. The plot unfolds with lots of surprises.
John
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Benjamin Scraps replied to the topic DUP farewell playlist in the forum Underground Caverns
Favorite time o’ year, fer sure! Happy Halloween to all the Stars
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Read MoreSlithered invitationwith diamond-cutvendettas.Sellswords carved carnival sideshow smilesdarting buttresseyes commencea lust for firesang the bird:conjecture cockfightsa finer company~requisite quislingdangles...
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Sounds rough and sad to me at the same time.
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Well now, Benjamin 🍷
Here, in this gobsmacking piece, is the exact point of issue I was making when you mentioned being “an undisciplined Free Verse poet” … there’s nothing about this poem but an excellent use of skillful poetic devices to command the reader to halt, proceed, imagine, and “feel” every moment, twist, turn, and diversion into your wondrously rendered world of abstract, mind-bending ambiguation, and I say this while sitting here bulge-eyed and jaw-dropped, not only from your phantasmagorical diction of verbosity, but how you’ve used white-space to create mood and imagery, while capturing and holding your readers’ spellbound attention.
Sheesh, M’Friend, it’ll take awhile to shake this one from my consciousness!
Good, really GOOD stuff, Syr Poet! Thanks for the rare experience! ⁓ Richard🖌
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The poor guy. lol He should have known better. When vamps smell food they go for it. 🙂