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Read MoreYou take me to a dream of nonsensical promisesOf rainbows and diamonds falling from the skyA kiss placed strategically on the browScreams of hidden thoughts and wants Why should we not indulge in a dreamAllow liberties and fanciful playOnce awakened...
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Thank you, Tim;)) <3
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I felt instantly swept into a pure, sensuous dream. Every line is brimming with color, desire, and such a playful, intoxicating energy. It’s more than a cocktail; it’s a feast for the senses.
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Thank you, Romaj…It’s a feast for the senses…appreciate that;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I love the playful nature of this write my friend. Excellent! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Nice work Fia. You’re a wonderful poet!
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Thank you so much, Vision
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Read MoreIt's so long since I felt your touch. How do we sleep in the same bed and not even graze each other? You pushed me away, With self-deprecating statements. You tell me you are sorry. As I suffer from your exile. Till death we said. How...
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Haunted by passion and intimacy gone cold and pallid. I can relate. The question is, how do you reignite a fizzled star.
Always a pleasure
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That is the question. Thank you Detritus;))
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Its quite painful to be in a relationship when libidos get out of sync.
You’ve captured it perfectly in this piece.
I haven’t found a fix …. hope you are more successful.
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Thank you, Peter;))
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It’s a sad story as old as time itself. I’m sure at some time in the past cavemen through their cavewomen out into the mud, and space alien women are floating in space because they didn’t clean the dashboard of the UFO controls good enough. 🙂
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Thak you, Tim;))
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This really captures the ache of a love that feels distant while still sharing the same space. “How did we die? / Laying in this bed.” says so much with so few words.
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Thank you, Romaj;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. I felt the ache in your words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Painful, tragic, brilliantly told in this piece. Great!!
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Thank you, yes, it is tragic.;))
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Over sometimes long before it is declared over. No winners. A tie in last place. A slow painful death of a relationship…
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Agreed, Thank you, Paula;))
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I think I’ve been in that bed–or one very similar. You express very well the cold shoulder of love collapsing. I wish love potions were real.
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Fia, this is a heartbreakingly powerful poem. This poem about what happens when one partner in a relationship lets go is such a real human experience that you put into words the burned across the page.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Read MoreA Jersey Shore in Ryegate There were raspberries in that pasture there was a hill from which we could see a couple old Vermont towns we were the youth of the fifties scrambling through the brush dodging cows that gave us a puzzled eye chewing cud in...
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How sad that all things must change. I can relate in some ways just walking out my front door and seeing rows of houses where once woods where we played sat. All my childhood friends left when they heard of other boroughs moving in. They were right. I can imagine how hard it must be for you to go back and see a different world, one not so loving.
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thanks Tim…most of it is the same….this concerned one particular spot I remembered, or thought I did and wanted to look at it once more. But I could not get to it…all overgrown…
thanks for your words…and sharing your story.
j.
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This poem is full of gentle nostalgia – the raspberries, the cows, the hills all bring the past vividly to life. It’s quietly profound, and I could almost step into that memory myself. Beautifully done, j
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I wish you could literally step into it, Romaj ….it was and still is so beautiful up there in Ryegate.
Thanks for your words.
j.
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Phenomenally penned, Jacob. Love the nostalgic flavor, and the memories in a small corner of a past universe. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Easy to write about that place; it is the most special place for me.
thank you.
j.
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Some say you should never go back. Not me, I am a great one for nostalgia. Things change, not always for the better, but memories last a lifetime. Fabulous poem and your latest book title too. I love our bovine friends. Can remember walking through meadows myself as a child.
Chris
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Nothing like going back….nothing like it at all.
thanks, Chris
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This is whimsical with beautiful wording throughout, Fia. Really nice work. 🙂