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Read Moremy body’s on the groundface half buried in dirtjaw hangin loosebreath snaggin in my throatmy shoulder’s twisted back wrongshirt stuck to my spine with sweatblood on my cheekwhere gravel kissed mefingers twitch oncelike they’re reachin for a penreflex or...
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Eww, leaking poetry into the dirt. I can see embalming fluid being the ink. I cringed a couple of times. That’s good.
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thank you
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I love how you kept the flow in rhythm and words…this is no easy task…you are a master artist and I understand it take a lot from you ❤️
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I really appreciate that
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“my soul works quiet
rummagin thru my busted frame
pulls a sentence from my throat
a broken note from a cut in my wrist”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. The lines highlighted above are fucking killer. Appreciate you.
Damian
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some of my favorite lines too. thanks Damian
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much appreciated. soul does lota pickin up of pieces
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
OUR FIRST ’BACK TO POETRY BASICS’ SESSION:
“LEARNING & UNDERSTANDING THE ENGLISH SONNET”
by Richard W. Jenkins
© 22 Oct, 2025DETAILS OF THE ENGLISH [Shakespearean] SONNET
(taking notes for reference is a very good idea)A bit of interesting and awakening study is ahead, but it will be for this first time only in order to fami…Read More
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Thanks for the Likes! 🤓
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Read Morecolor me in shades of greystreaks of blacksblues that pulse in dyin veinstiny specks of glowin whitespretendin to be stars take the color from my eyeslet them melt outa their socketsvision drippin down my cheeksa man made of moonless nightsin...
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Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi, TFT! I welcome you to “BACK TO POETRY BASICS”, and would like to invite you to join-in on our Sonnet lesson (two posts below). It’s easy: just read and follow along. I look forward to sharing with you. ⁓ Richard🖌