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Read Morei dig with both handsmud swallowinmy wrists and forearmspullin downwardthe weight of the earthdraggin against my shoulders roots knot round my fingersknuckles cracked open by rocksdirt packed under my nailsrainwater runnin browndown my throatslippin deeperand the holekeeps begginto become my...
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Powerfully penned, 253. Another excellent write that makes me feel claustrophobic my friend. I too have written about quicksand or trying to escape the grave. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreYour hips and thighsNeed to feel my palmsGladly I will serve youReceive and relish this timeBare your teethLet me see the defianceLet me hear that inner growlWe are not going to stop tonightYou will be worn out before meStruggle...
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Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write that’s fire my friend. This one wasn’t for the tame of heart.. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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No it wasn’t;)) Thank you Damian
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The ink is dark, but screaming. I like it, Fia.
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Thank you, Atticus;)
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A fearsome statement. Full of fire.
Regards James-
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Thank you, James;)
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OMG! what an aperitif for dark pleasures to come, Fia xx
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Thank you, Hj;)
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend and this is the tamed down version? This was fire. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Yes it is. haha. Thank you cuz. :))
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Read Moretongues tangledteeth tuggin at skinthe tv throwinthat tired blue lighttowards your face there’s tendernessthru the tension of itthe terrible truththat I could takethis momenttoo far inside me turn it into somethintraced thru my fingers twistin it into panicthat three years from...
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This is slow build to sadness. Think about the future but never too far.
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Powerfully penned, 253. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWhat would happen if time stood still Would a tear still drop Would the heart still beat Would that moment still be etched in memory Words can never be taken back When both cheeks are slapped there is no other to give Wounds that are...
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Nice write Fia.
I’m not sure if time even exists in the universe…..seems like a human construct.
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It might be. I find it weird its never enough time. Thank you Peter 😊
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Unfortunately some live in snow globes. Frozen in the same memories and misfortunes.
A well written, thought provoking poem, with a good concept. Well done, Fia! “)-
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Snow globes …well that’s a thought. To be stuck in that one time and place
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Im trying new ways to inspire myself. 😊
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Chère F.,
How have you done this, with almost each line/sentence a different perspective.
You always seem to surprise me and it looks like maybe it’s surprising you that you do.
What a lovely way to start a new week!
Love it to bits!
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It is inspiring me. Pushing me a bit to see things differently. Thank you Gus 😊
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To me, time as a gift. None of us knows, how long their lives will last. I think, it is most important to use the gift of time we receive to find out who we are, why we are here and how to live a life in harmony and at peace with ourselves and all of creation.
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Thank you so much, Elke;))
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No idea
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I take it that you are sinking down into the mud. The more you pull yourself up the wetter the dirt gets making it feel impossible to get out of it. Interesting piece