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    sucks

    with intensity I approach needy and bluethere is a void around me full of sexual energysucking you into my darkhalted feelimg, my impression it's depressionmy soul rises with the passion, then the tide pulls me backundulating passion plays with...

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    Coffee Shop Chanteuse

    Coffee Shop Chanteuse sweet Bourbon necklacelaced in cappuccino embersof lost quiet moonshinedeep in pirate alley kisseswhen Luna rides her stallionhigh in the heat of summer skyover spired flames of starsthat burn in a rhapsodyof dark river chicorywhose smoke swirls in...

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    • Sweet descriptive piece with hints of longing

      • Thanks so much my friend. This lady was singing old jazz songs at the coffee shop today. She was my muse.

        John

    • Hello John,

      Your description here captures the atmosphere so perfectly. Your detail is always so razor sharp. Nice work.

      • Deep gratitude Visions. I thank you from my heart and soul. Love that you appreciated my evocation of atmosphere through details. Great thanks.

        John

    • Beautifully penned, John. Phenomenal imagery my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Gracias Damian. Thank you so much for reading and your appreciation of both me and my poetry.

        John

    • Your poem puts me in the mood of sailing and travel, the image of a sailor who is watching and expressing the scenes, keeping it in his head because soon it will only be a memory. There is sadness going along all the lines. Emotionally written.

      • Thank you so much Light for your heartfelt reflections on my poem. Your impressions of my words here are deeply appreciated. Love your interpretation of the mood within my words. Indeed there is a depth of understanding in your thoughts and the feelings my poem inspired for you that really feels right. Deep gratitude.

        John

    • Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

    • Inspiration can come from many places, but to be able to create something like this is exceptional, John. Great poem with creative images. 🙂

      • Deep gratitude my friend. Very glad you enjoyed this offering of mine. Much appreciated. Indeed the chanteuse who inspired this poem was an exceptional inspiration. 🙂

        John

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    silent witness with the talented Adagio

    The wind, a phantom legion, howled its ancient song, Through skeletal branches, where dead leaves clung. A tempest brewed, a symphony of dread, whispering secrets of the long since dead, The house, a wounded beast, with shutters torn and weak,...

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    • This was so perfectly executed that I can’t tell which is whose voice. Powerfully descriptive imagery,both of you 🙌

      • hello beautiful Willow good afternoon thank you graciously for the love on this we both appreciate it deeply ❤️

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    I Forgot.

    I usually don't. But this time, I did, and I still have the scars to prove it. She slammed the door and walked out of the house. By the time I ran to catch her, she pulled out of the...

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    • You forgot a birthday. Well, it looks like you made up for it. lol

    • Sam, I hope you’ve learned your lesson! Maybe invest in a calendar? Lol, God forbid you forget an anniversary. 😉 Great read, just enough to get the blood pumping.

      xx ~P.G💋

      • what calendar ??? OMG there are calendars to remind us of those stuff???? crap…

    • Hoi hoi
      Love this one a lot. Really good write.
      The corners of my mouth have a will of their own and keep on turning up.

      Did you ever considerate writing a song to the accompaniment of slamming doors?
      If you are not going to do it, I will.
      Well, honestly someone’s got to do it huh?

      I’ll be on the look out for your next.
      Kind regards, Gus

      • No I haven’t thought of writing that song… You are welcome to do it… I just need some time to heal after that birthday door slamming

    • That story sure illustrates a great way to show forgiveness.

    • im sorry… I hope that heightened sense of arousal didn’t get you in trouble. ill go hide somewhere so you dont find me

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    Befallen

      In keeping with every ancient lore I confess my love to the one I adore.  You took my heart and made it soar diving through every celestial shore.  The angels cried for a long lost soul stripped naked to his minimal core.  He wanted to...

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