This is an outstanding poem, dear Abbey! The imagery, the metaphors, the soothing atmosphere – everything is beautiful!

Thank you, my friend.

People often say how beautiful and soft is a rose, but I always saw something deeper and here You’ve expressed it,That’s the strength of the rose, she stays kind in all the ugliness, she yeilds with the hardships… she grows with beauty even in the darkness. a power those only with pure hearts can acknowledge. Thank You for the lovely read my friend.

Thank you, Damian.

Gothic, fevered, and unflinching.
This reads like a candlelit confession written with bone and ink—decay made lyrical, excess turned intentional.
Dense, haunted, and unapologetically baroque in the best way.

Hauntingly penned, Adagio. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Great poem, dear Abbey! Oh yes, you are surely not the plain and calm surface of water. Your words pierce the apparent calm of the superficial. They are thought provoking, reveall the monsters of the deep and raise awareness!

Thank you, Damian.

Thank you, Elke.

“..
I think she wants some water..” “)

Perhaps, a Keebler

Powerfully penned, Adagio. Excellent storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian.

When silence screams and the Soul presents itself naked – this is an authentic and honest ghost, one of the kind we only fear, when we are afraid to face our own reflection in the mirror. Brilliantly written, dear Abbey!

Thank you, Elke.