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Read MoreΒ Requiem for the berries Ripe on the tongue That once echoed In the new mown hayNow swallowed by darkTainted with decay A last breathA solemn pleaEternal graceNot granted to theeA wraith I have becomeA soul with no formFor a taste...
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Yes it did.
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A wonderful write! Well done both of you Fia and Adagio! “)
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Thank you, M.E
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Thank you, M.E.
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Greetings, Fia & Adagio 🌾
To my mind’s-eye, this is an excellently rendered Freestyle co-write, with vividly creative metaphor, smooth syntax, spot-on rhymes (soft: form/harm), in a flawlessly dancing rhythm, emotional imagery that jerks startled nerve ends, and just the right amount of ambiguity to peak one’s interest and murder any trace of possible boredom.
I’ve heard rotten berries can be fatal 😵
Two masters weaving their best β¦
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Thank you.
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Oh, sure thing!
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Read MoreExploring the silence echoing from shoes with each footstep, echoes that linger like fingers tracing headstones Taking the ribbon from my hairShaking it loose, letting it fall carrying weight of those who procrastinate as the dark cradles one's ought's of memories...
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Righteous darkness, Adagio…
I, too, ponder these things…
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Read MoreHolding memories I cannot possessin a crowded closetconnecting soulssize, 9 and a half empathy for shoebox
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Read MoreIn twilight's breath, dark swallowing light cloaked in shadows of dry gin and vermouth echoes growing louder in council of secrets no longer muffled whispers of raven flightbut Polly wants a cracker perched on a throneyet feast for the...
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Thank you for the collab. It came out nice.:))