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For The Berries – with Fia Naturie

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Thank you, Fia, for your collaboration.

 

Requiem for the berries
Ripe on the tongue
That once echoed
In the new mown hay
Now swallowed by dark
Tainted with decay

A last breath
A solemn plea
Eternal grace
Not granted to thee
A wraith I have become
A soul with no form
For a taste of sweet nectar
Has caused so much harm

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    1. Greetings, Fia & Adagio 🌾

      To my mind’s-eye, this is an excellently rendered Freestyle co-write, with vividly creative metaphor, smooth syntax, spot-on rhymes (soft: form/harm), in a flawlessly dancing rhythm, emotional imagery that jerks startled nerve ends, and just the right amount of ambiguity to peak one’s interest and murder any trace of possible boredom.

      I’ve heard rotten berries can be fatal 😵

      Two masters weaving their best …
      with my thanks for sharing your delightful brand of morbidity! ⁓ Richard🖌

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