Betty

Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

doubt

Poetry

April 27, 2025

9

sorrow-filled calamitychaotic hurt within meMadness comes along to interveneShe lulls me into securityThe voices are always so welcomingThey make me feel lovedIn a cold world, I am never alonetouch the dark and explain yourselfSo I do the darkness comfortsbeguiled...

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7 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  This is an interesting read. I keep going back to “Touch the dark and explain yourself “I mean to explain to the darkness why you had to touch it. makes me think. Nice Brenda;))
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    hello beautiful Fia I guess I’m talking about the dark and while doing it its interest is peaked and it asks me to explain myself thank you for your interest 💕
- Crimsin
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  thank you Jacqui for reading lovely poetess and sharing your thoughts 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Darkness is the thorns, surrounding the rose. Beautifully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Damian I love the poetic comment 💕
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Powerful work.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

grey moodiness

Poetry

April 27, 2025

0

It's grey today outsideIt matches my somber moodWith feelings of melancholy, I feel weighed downYou would think the rain would signify cleansing to meAnd the raindrops by themselves wouldIt's the grey depression I can't takeweeks that drag on under...

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• 1 year, 4 months ago

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M.E wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

A Short Reading In The Living Room

Poetry

April 27, 2025

13

Thought reading,in a Sunday morning lightRed Dragon book in handAnd coffee mug on the stand, as a soldierServing quick bullet shots of caffeinOn my command.I couldn't stop thinking ofThe visionary lines of BlakeAnd the macabre of Lecter.Pearl Jam blasted...

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9 Comments
- M.E
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Patricia! “)
- M.E
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Adira! “)
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Powerful work.
- M.E
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you m, Thomas! “)
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I know what you’re reading!
  
  “All while Pearl Jam blasting in my ears.” Change the tense on your verb here. “Pearl Jam blasted in my ears”
  - M.E
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    I love it. Any horror fiction that I can lay my hands unto is a favorite read. Haha
    
    Thank you for the correction! Reading your comments is a bliss “)
- M.E
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I am glad you can relate to my poem. Thank you for the read and love! “)
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, M.E. A very powerful read, again fantastic imagery my friend. Loved the movies, mainly because, Hopkins is a great actor. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - M.E
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian! I appreciate it.
    
    Indeed, Hopkins’ performance is dope. “)
Drieks wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

At first sight

Poetry

April 27, 2025

3

No stress.Stressed out nonetheless. Avoid eye contact. Give my mind a rest. Feeling blessed. Blood rushing through my veins. Do I excel or fail this test. Problematic maths keep matters compressed. Feeling less. Less than I thought I’d feel...

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2 Comments
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Superb flow. Powerful work.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Drieks. Seamless flow. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
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