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Read MoreThey swim in fiber, without flesh or blood, drone sharks with soulless eyes, sniffing out clicks, devouring silence, with teeth of algorithm and calm. They don't roar, they don't scream—they merely suggest, with fake smiles and filters in a row....
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Thanks! Appreciate you!
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Wow, what great metaphor in this.
The state of politics and the state of journalism.
And we fall for it all and go after the bait and get caught in the net of despair and anger.
Really strong writing…telling it like it is, reminds me of The Beats.
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Thanks! Appreciate you! Postmodern is a full deception.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, next level amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you back. Big hug my friend.
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‘The networks cast shiny bait, baits of likes, likes, promises.
And we, shoals of scattered attention, dance to the beat of their haste.Coherence? An extinct luxury, like fossils of ethics in digital museums.
Everything is fragment, everything is instant, in a feed that never returns.Time is no longer a line—it is a loop, an eternal scroll, without digestion.
Thinking has become an obsolete gesture, feeling, a notification.’Today’s essential thought, set within thinking out of the normal box – forever welcome. Focus on the might be will.. the other has had its day – perhaps?
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Everything is fragment. Future is always tomorrow. Appreciate you.
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Read MoreGood Morning, You did one thing wrong, you woke upIf I haven't told you beforeI'm tired of this rut As my stomach turnsAcid reflux burnsI know exactly what I must do Do you know how I feel? when you devour a mealGo look...
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Welcome back
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Thanks dude.
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Great! Happy to see you here. Big hug.
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Hello PAR. Appreciate the comments.
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hi Keith this is very honest❤
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Nice to hear from you Brenda. Thank you..xo
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If they were Krispy Kreme, I might understand the urge. But wow, Vol, this is so upfront and in your face, I think it
simply broke the mirror.
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HA! Yeah Krispy Kreme’s are good. That mirror has been broken for a long time. No need to fix. Thanks Jacob. Appreciate it!!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend, you still bring it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Appreciate the comment.
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This is a hard hitting piece that tells more about the state of the relationship than about the outer appearance of this woman. If he looked at her with the eyes of love, everything about her from the messy hair to the stained dressing gown would appear beautiful to him. He would only see her inner beauty. But between the couple you describe there isn’t much love anymore.
Perfectly observed and put into words, dear Keith! Xoxo-
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Hello Sappho. You’re right. There is no love left here in this relationship. Only criticism and mockery. A wonderful observation only you can deliver my awesome friend.
Peace..xoxoxxo
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Kinda felt that way about my first husband. I have referred to him as Fat Boy and tiny-dick. Worst was that despite being nearly 400 lbs (I always say 600) and having a “stub” – he cheated! Add in the violence and threats…I wished for him to die.
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DAMN! I believe you mentioned “fat boy” & “tiny dick” in a few of your writes. Appreciate the feedback, always!
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Well, Damn, the reiteration of Go look in the mirror is a banger. People generally do not see what they become until they are forced to. Keith very, very open write
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True. Appreciate the feedback.
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Read MoreCandy hearts and paper flowers.They are all we need.In times of sadness and greed. Candy hearts and paper flowers feed.With skies full of blue.And sunshine,daisies in bloom. If the night is ever dark and gloomy.You know you can be honest to...
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Read MoreI offer myself to you twice a day,at morning’s opening, at night’s soft closure an endless vow that neither time nor agecan strip away.I know the reasons you reject my offer:weariness dragging, desire gone quiet,the body’s shifting tides,the cooling...
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Lucky you 💋
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That’s a stimulating offer if your a woman. I hope you received many. Cool write.
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Loved this piece…the offer, the pain, the excitement, and the hope of it all!
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Read More“If motherfuckas act an ass I give them straight shitThis goes for any man, woman or child falling into the category of bitch, “Call it a one way ticket to my bad sideSo, motherfuckas can take that high...
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What an amazing and truthful piece. This word is fucked! Brilliance is written all over this piece. Great work my friend.