-
-
![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
Benjamin Scraps replied to the topic DUP farewell playlist in the forum Underground Caverns
Happy New Year’s to all the poets at Stars Rite (even though I don’t celebrate the new year until April 1st, the REAL new year, and only fools feel otherwise) Keep on ritin’!!
-
![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
Benjamin Scraps wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreThere was a shadow at dawn and a growth in my death a Black Stranger birdwatcher paying for space with soul dismayed a garden gnome on a pile of stone a-flowering sparks from the formless dark: a hinterland education bandwidth break a suburban discernment wavelength split a living room oracular crop circle drawl your friendly neighborhood creepshow crime watch ...
3 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This caught my eye the most and I could not shake it. Looking for the higher power and as you look its like a rush of happiness. very interesting piece of work
“my energy burns
in the demiurge Sun,
turning the worm
as bird songs die
on a dopamine high” -
![Profile picture of NAAJIR]()
This vibe hits hard with some heavy, cryptic and foreboding tones.
Straight diggin this!!Much respect
Naaj
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreShe carried his cards and letters,bundled with a rubber band,in her yellow raincoat. He stood on the motel roof,watching the freeway paint the night,headlights begging the question,Will I ever get it right? She mumbles from below.Depends if you take the right...
8 Comments-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you.
-
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
A trip into your mind, reveals how damaged we are as no one is set free. Unfiltered brilliance in your poetry & how you cut through the grit with your ideas. Great!
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
I appreciate it.
-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
What I love about this is the double reflection. The reflection of the writer and the reflection of lights on the freeway. They blend beautifully into something very deep and human
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you so much Willow.
-
-
![Profile picture of Neville]()
I think this is probably my most favouwritest of your little masterpieces to date Thomas .. actually, I’m pretty sure its write up there near the summit .. Neville
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Thank you, my friend.
-
-
![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
Nick DC wrote a new post
![]()
Read Morehead's all up in a haze no one cares for me oh well, it's all i have to say telling myself it'll be ok morning will shine light some other day ups and downs, right now diving in a tailspin thinking i need to rethink...
2 Comments-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Nick. Brutally honest write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
I like how in the first stanza, you start out hazy and that no cares, then the next you explain the addiction and how everyone should relate in one form or another, because there are so many different addictions. Then you come back at the end and want to know who your true friends are.
You lead the reader of this very nicely. Good write Nick;))
-
- Load More Posts
Powerfully penned, Benjamin. This is an excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian