Love how this is unfolding. Fav part is:
“What pissed Dorothy off was that she was doing this by herself
Because the Lion, the Scarecrow and Tin Man got scared and refused to help,”

Powerfully penned, Keith. This was an excellent fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hate hollows the spirit until nothing remains but the echo of its own ruin.
Only love, when remembered, can unseal what the heart has already buried.

This reads like a moral reckoning set to a slow, steady drumbeat.
The contrast between hate and love is simple, direct, and effective.

Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Ahh the processed food we consumed is decayed in desease…why was I eating when I read this. Good one. Good visuals

Oh man the enemy is within. Only you can break yourself down. Good spill

Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent exorcism my friend. Seriously, in this instance that’s what I’d call this amazing write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love it when you’re SO dark, Mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx

Silence in itself can be scary for those who need the noice to comfort them.

Thanks for reading and commenting.
Silence is as powerful as explosions.
Regards James

The repetition works like a drumbeat you can’t escape.
Silence becomes the loudest violence here.