My first effort to eave a review here did not post. this is a test for a review, #2.

Well, you may not be Shakespeare, Sam, but the meanings quite clear; you’re horney with no chance at gettin’ any. Bummer.

The concept of the pendulum is put in perfectly. Nice piece

Powerfully penned, Neville. Another excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Bless you Damian, here’s me wishing you all good things .. Neville

It does feel awful to kill a living animal but they are dangerous and they steal food. I hope your okay.

Thanks Fia for reading.
I really just wanted it to leave but rats arent inclined to do that.Im ok with it now but I still wasn’t thrilled about killing it.
🙏