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    peace and anti peace

    A quiet morning,A cup of tea,A gentle breeze,And I am free. A birds sings,A lovely tree,A dog barks,And I am free. Somewhere in this quiet space,A monster hides away,Eat it must and so it does,Reveal its tortured face. The mind begins,The chatter...

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    • Okay, mon frere, my competitor, I see you have entered this Morning Coffee contest. Yours is lovely, then brutal, and in the end, bleak. Mine is cute, brutal, and in the end, funny. But mine has a secret ingredient: Coffee. Oh, I know, the rules say coffee OR tea are the liquids we honor — but MINE is COFFEE, and COFFEE is in the name of the contest, so I WIN! >THWEETT< (THAT'S A CARTOON inspired spitting action) So I win! hahahaHA! (that's a sarcastic laugh) Beside, Mine is about a cat and no one can tell a cat it's a loser and not be despised the rest of his life. Of course you can quit now (he said slyly) and save yourself the embarrassment of losing to a cat! (notice how I made the cat both powerful AND weak! How clever! Bonus points! Nice work though, BDB(P)

    • Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    The Far Side of Pain

      The Far Side of Pain   The vortex of pain does have a bottom. True, after you reach oblivion, skin shredded, bloody, and lying in a pool of anguish, there comes a calm, a realization you have been reduced, and relief is found in the jab of a...

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    • I’m aware of the phases of pain, Curt, and you seem to be as well, tho I do see some differences in our perceptions of it. You might like my piece, “Dark Alice Comes to Call.” Hmmm, I just checked, and it seems I never uploaded that one. Strange, I’ll have to remedy that. In the meantime, along the same lines is, “Dead Muse.” It’s here somewhere.

      • Hi FlatDaddy, thanks for the comment. And I will read “Dead Muse”. Perhaps you posted “Dark Alice…..” at WritersCafe’?? I will look there to see and read.

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    I wonder if it's the last timeI feel the subtle change in her skin temperature or breathing.I wonder if it's the last timeI've been kissed with desire,really kissed,the kind that means something.I wonder if it's the last timeshe held...

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