Summary:
It's a great day for observation.
A quiet morning,
A cup of tea,
A gentle breeze,
And I am free.
A birds sings,
A lovely tree,
A dog barks,
And I am free.
Somewhere in this quiet space,
A monster hides away,
Eat it must and so it does,
Reveal its tortured face.
The mind begins,
The chatter speeds,
The peace is gone,
And darkness feeds.
Okay, mon frere, my competitor, I see you have entered this Morning Coffee contest. Yours is lovely, then brutal, and in the end, bleak. Mine is cute, brutal, and in the end, funny. But mine has a secret ingredient: Coffee. Oh, I know, the rules say coffee OR tea are the liquids we honor — but MINE is COFFEE, and COFFEE is in the name of the contest, so I WIN! >THWEETT< (THAT'S A CARTOON inspired spitting action) So I win! hahahaHA! (that's a sarcastic laugh) Beside, Mine is about a cat and no one can tell a cat it's a loser and not be despised the rest of his life. Of course you can quit now (he said slyly) and save yourself the embarrassment of losing to a cat! (notice how I made the cat both powerful AND weak! How clever! Bonus points! Nice work though, BDB(P)
Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian