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Read MoreThe moon on her dress corruscates my fingers with cobalt shards of icebergs, rolling fingerprints beyond fabric Tidal hair breaches the breakers down her back, the last waterfall on earth weeps for every desire lost at sea Catching the pearls of her eyes in trawls of my dilated bleeding, if...
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As always, you are too kind Mark. I don’t miss many from DU, but you are definitely on the missed list.
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This truly shows your intelligence and talent. Very supernacular.
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Ha. I’m loving “supernacular” Sounds a bit like an Oasis song. Thank you A.
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I agree with previous commentors on the talent.
I like the analogies presented in this write.
Especially fond of the last stanza…reading this makes me feel like I saw her memories
just before they entombed her under the cathedral floor.j.
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian good evening 💕
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Read MoreWritten by J.DoucetteCopyright © September 2025 All rights reserved.The Result of Never:Life didn’t pauseIt didn’t warn meIt just shifted—and suddenly,there you wereI blinkedI gaspedno way… is this real?YesIt wasfor both of usIn that oneundeniable moment—it wasbut it takes workmutual...
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“where your eyes almost met my soul so many great lines here I can feel your pain lovely lady hugs 💕
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Pulls at my heartstrings, amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A very intense piece.
So much brooding. I hear you.
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Quite beautiful. Love always takes work, but perhaps not so much.
Touching words dear.
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