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Read MoreRest in petrol, flames before cremation licked her thighs where no father’s hands should have been Driving down the motorway she must have seen the country shiver with pale light, swathes of spruce, obscuring, paths, fields, old stones, unborn rose quivering for the sun, she must have seen... Family albums...
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sorry to read of your son. addiction is a cruel bitch. life is very fragile, so it’s important to cherish every sunset etc
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I agree with crimsin this is very heavy. There sadness, grief and confusion left behind because of the suicide will never truly go away.
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That true Fia.
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Excellent. truly.
The topic is always brutal in its finality. How it is written of is where we, as the living, try to reason with the utter chaos that it must be on them. I never, ever understand that quitter mentality. That sounds cruel, calling them quitters, but that is how I see it and deal with it. I have suicides in my family, and it pisses me off.
Many of us have had horrendous circumstances to deal with, but the act of surviving is what makes us supreme beings.
Hope is eternally gold. It makes us rich.
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Thanks Mark. Appreciated.
To the outside world, she had it all. Caring husband, beautiful kids and a good career, but who knows what goes on within the skull? She wrote too, and in hindsight, there were the most portentous of clues. But therein lies another problem. So easy to blah, blah and bullshit within a word circus. I totally concur – hope sits beyond even the darkest midnight.
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Read MoreIn our minds your memory burns brightGone too soon, laid to rest, eternallyThe autumn leaves and frostDecorate your absenceMemories of happinessMemories of love Long, winding roads led you homeLed us on different pathsTangled like branchesLost in the sound of silence Your...
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Beautifully penned, Keith. Excellent write with amazing imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the feedback my friend.
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hello dearest Keith beautiful it’s true they live on as a part of us ❤️
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Always & Forever. Thank you Brenda..xo
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This is like letting out a long sigh. Missing the feel of Autumn
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Thank you Fia.
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Brilliant imagery.
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Thank you Thomas.
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Read MoreDrink from the cupNo longer blinded eyesThe tide it turns and the pendulum swingsDry your tears before you cry She's coming back around againWith a secret to tell You're overtaken by the graspState of panic you turn and look backOpen your...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write, the words sway like a pendulum my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you enjoyed this piece Damian. Thanks!!
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This feels like a snake bite. Injection of venom feeling the sting of the bite. Nicely done
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Cool. Glad you connected with this piece. Appreciated.
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Read MoreThe ecstasy of all sinsDancing naked in fireSmiling seduces meInnocence lostThe moon is our accompliceEternal winter nightsPleasures at midnight A wild femaleA treat so deepA rose with thornsAn everlasting treat EroticaI see you in my dreamsEroticaDesires of the fleshEroticaDelusions insaneEroticaHot like...
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Passionately penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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There’s a relatable feeling that comes with this. That thirst and insatiable hunger is there in the lines. I know the feeling. Nice writing.
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Appreciate the kind words Tim. Thanks!!
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This is hot and delicious. You wrote this perfectly
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Awesome. Thank you Fia.
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a very heavy write no one should bear such a burden it’s too much to bear… my son drank himself to death we are left with a hole in our life knowing he chose death… hugs ❤️