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Read MoreI am consumed within the jaws of something that I do not understand. Consumed by a thing called psychosis. Eaten alive by my own mind. Consumed and dissolved by this poison. My judgment is disintegrating. Consumed with bite marks on my soul, scars of the past haunt me still. Now...
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Medication takes time to seep into the body and take hold. This is a powerful piece
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Read MoreYoung still I am. Though old I feel. The youthful blushes once there, now forever gone. The fresh feeling of being young, replaced with the depression of aging. How can I get it back? Not my youth I mean, but the feeling of it. That sense of having...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Middle age is peculiar. You are neither young nor old and yet both. It is a window through which you can see — what was, what is, and will be. How will you choose to look through the glass?
I am in the same position, my friend. Excellent piece!
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Read MoreForever young we are! Feels we are this way always when eye to eye, lips on lips. Forever in love we will be! Be forever this way and forever our hearts melting. I love you, heart you, hugging you so we can feel each other's heartbeat. Romantic...
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Phenomenal write, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This feels like young/new love. Nicely done Daniel. xoxo
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You write beautifully.
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Thank you, Alexandria. I write romance, horror and erotica. I strive at making whatever I write memorable.
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I’ve been reading your work. It is memorable.
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Read MoreWhy can’t we just be friendsTravel the world and have some fun I want to see the wonders of the East Swim the shores of beautiful Spain I’ve always wanted to see the Great Wallbathe naked under the Marrakech sunWhy do...
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An emotional write! Well written my friend!
Though Marrakesh would be so hot to sunbathe in! “)-
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Thanks…Going to Marrakech next week… I’ll let you know
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NOPE
You’re mine, Sam. Shackles, Collar, and Leash. The whole damn package. Do you seriously think I’m letting you out of this dungeon? Get on your knees and open up. I’ve got your Sunshine Rain right here for ya like orange juice for breakfast and a whole world of wonder for you to taste and worship. Just another day in paradise, baby. You know you love it.-
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I’ll always be yours
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What is love but madness wrapped in chocolate?
A trap for the sweettoothed fool who presumes that it’s permanent.
Go on your trips Sam, leave love behind.
Take only your words and the truth….ageing,sickness,death.-
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Thank you my friend..
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Beautifully penned, Sam. A great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks … I appreciate your kinds words always
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Funny how DK said you are locked in her dungeon when the both of you are in mine. This is a beautiful piece Sam. Midnight sun..very nice.
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I had to escape the back door.. you two were busy doing.. ok too much info here
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Fia, the pronoun was ‘this’ dungeon – I mean, I don’t want everyone to know that you own me. Well, I guess that’s common knowledge anyway.
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Wonderful work. Superb.
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Thanks … no not wonderful… just truthful
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Read MorePrecious, yet brittle like a fiddle. Delicate, frail, alas cracked in the middle. Riddled by plagues, plagued by a riddle. Critically acclaimed yet worshipped by little.Pill popper's delight. Stage fright amongst a plethora of other might be reason why...
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Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…
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Thank you for reading/listening!
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian!
I’m so happy you like it! 🙏🏻
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This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.
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Thank you so much Fia!
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Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”You have some great lines in this piece.
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Thank you so much DK ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. A very profound write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian