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Read MoreIn Cadence of Rhyme I am always so less demandingAfter crossing the bridge of understanding,Where I can meet myself on the other side,Folding in upon me just like the tide. For what a mixture that makes—Me, myself, and I, all our...
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Read MoreThe door slammed behind me, indicating that the chief must have decided I was in the wrong and her incompetent rookie was in the right.“What the hell were you doing coming in the back way? You are no longer...
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Your a great storyteller Fia. Nice work!!
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my story;))
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how you repeat that couplet at the end. It wraps everything up in a neat package. This is a really cool piece with sociopathic undertones which catch my attention. I love an unreliable narrator. I love an evil genius. A lot of women do… the bad boy syndrome. Boys grow up to be devils. And girls… well, sometimes we invite them in.
Nice piece!
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I really appreciate you for shining your light on this.
A man’s (in this case) internal struggle in such a situation has always intrigued me, yet is beyond alien to me at the same time.
I love exploring my uncharted territory.
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Read MoreShe was An exquisite mime A carved forgotten beauty Blindsided my dreamscape...she did Propped her...
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Love this stanza and the picture is beautiful.
“She’d string together days of future-past theories
Just for me…where we aged like fine wine
Where all of our what-ifs became that potent fifth
Of liquefied love”-
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I’m glad you dug that particular stanza, Fia.
It’s pretty much the center piece of the mood sing I was
in when I penned this vibe.Big thx for the support
Naaj
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Beautifully penned, Naaj. Wonderful imagery and a great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yeah, this one sits in a very special corner of my mind.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts always, DamianNaaj
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She’s occupied my mind for decades.
Very special indeed.Thx for dropping your thoughts hun
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Read MoreClose my eyes right before the impactStray bullets masked as fake applause Through all the pain my soul still intactFuck being perfect I embrace my flaws Takes more imagination than I possessTo pretend their intentions aren’t cruelInstead of knowing they made...
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You start out with the bullet. Damn
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know how to make an entrance or introduction in this case. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I agree with Fia. Very powerful write Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re welcome. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Ya know, I would love to sit down one day with a cup of coffee, a cat & a fire just to read your entire collection. You never…not once…disappoint, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart such a cool and touching comment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sometimes life is like playing Russian Roulette. There’s truth in this.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It sometimes seems that way, I wish it wasn’t. Appreciate you.
Damian
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We play Russian Roulette with our lives everyday. Sad but true. Powerful piece my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Unfortunately, that appears to be the case. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, LDF. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian