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Read MoreIn the beginning of our relationship During our adventuresId jest with the phrase "Youve been gone for so long!"Though it was only 5 minutes And the days youd cook dinnerComing back from the kitchen with kisses Id continue the joke"You've...
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Read MoreI just don't know what to do with myselfTrapped in misery of my own makingBlasting the same song over and overEach turn met with sobbing and screaming I just don't know what to do with myself At first it...
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Read MoreNot one for hiding behind ghosts Illusions manifest with each voice Only a fool would doom his hosts While denying another of a choice So unsettled from never knowing Being unable to reason with guilt Shadows on the wall are growing Coming to poison what...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Gus. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Come back as often as you’d like. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Detritus]()
Your wallop of a write had me nodding in agreement. So many truths are nestled in every line. Love will indeed live forever! Outstanding write, my friend.
Clay
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Clay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Well said. No body is promised tomorrow.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Exactly, nobody is promised tomorrow. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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That last stanza sends this one home. Wonderful piece Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. My favorite stanza as well. Appreciate you.
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Dear D,
Inspirational to be sure. This write was a movie short where I could envision the hero if the piece roaming from one stanza to the next recognizing the differentiation of God and truth vs ai and evil. Great write. H🌷
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for sharing that wonderful vision with me, I like the lens you’re looking through. Appreciate you.
Damian
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” Shadows on the wall are growing
Coming to poison what God built ”
Those words were written with a hammer and chisel.
Dope overall vibe
Diggin the positive outro, brother…Much respect
Naaj
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I dig those lines as well. Thank you for your continued support my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sigh…where to start? I agree with Naaj up there. 👆 Those lines are definitely carved in granite. There’s a loss of humanity occurring on so many levels today. AI is replacing human labor, taking human paychecks and means of living. But AI does what man tells it. It’s not out there knocking on doors and handing out resumes. It’s the greed of man dehumanizing their fellows that’s doing the damage. The fact that we have a deranged overstuffed cheese puff feeding frenzy to his blind acolytes speaks volumes for the state of man’s moral compass right now. Every decision they’re making is destructive…to the earth (our host) and to its guests (us and wildlife). Yeah, I got rolling but this one took me to so many places. Keep carving those lines, my friend, and I’m sure I’ll keep ranting
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Like I told Naaj, I love those lines as well. I agree with you as I tend to do, I saw a story today where Chat GPT is causing people to commit crimes and hurt others and themselves. It needs to be regulated at the very least, but that ain’t happening with the Cheeto in power. These tech bros are accessories to the most corrupt regime after all. Man’s moral compass is damn near broken. lol. Always enjoy your commentary, even though I get you riled up. Appreciate you.
Damian
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For me, your ability to feel compassion and empathy (even while scorned) speaks the loudest here. I am also certain you’re aware, deep down, that the offender will pay the piper in the end, without anyone’s help. Pillars of sand always wash away, my friend. Interesting and fantastic vent!
Clay
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Thank you much!!
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Dear C,
I echo the thoughts of Detritus. The story line in this piece is very thoughtful of the unknowing party and bringing the offenders dirt into the open will mock what she’s built. Fabulous insight, also protective at your own expense. Sad subject, terrific writing. H🌷
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Thank you!!!
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chèr D.,
Amen to that.
I’ll be back tomorrow to read it again.
Kind regards, Gus