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Well damn this is intense and written with passion. The ending gave it softness and tenderness. loved it
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Chère PG.,
Hope this finds you well?!What a gentle ending you’ve made of this.
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. I always dig the layers in your work, fantastic storytelling, tied together with the conclusion of being in a better state of being by the end. Nicely done per usual, I’m a fan. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is a good opening. Enjoyed the story.