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Powerfully penned, Naaj. This is an excellent write my friend. Dig the layers in your work brother, I often miss the simpler times of an analog world, digital has no soul or warmth. Just my opinion. Much respect always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Analog is where it’s at, bro. I still have my vinyl tho I don’t play anymore.
Still connected to my DJ’s who still rock analog here in NYC. It’s still a major component
of my writing, but there’s no stopping AI. With that said…
Salvation is still a choice…Big thx for your insights, Damian
Much respect
Naaj
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
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This is a hell of a write, my friend — very powerful; but I see a typo, I think, when you wrote, “In a battle of write and earse” when I believe that last word should be “erase,” yes?
Also, you may not be aware of the big LISTEN button that now lives on this page and no doubt many more of yours as well as many others who labour but are not aware of our unwanted AI reader who has hitch-hiked on the work of everyone who has not attached the #excludetx tag to their work.
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This is quite mind-blowing.
I admire the punchy and reflective lines through each stanza.
I can sense this is a personal piece, it describes an emotional journey taking place.
It is enlightening and tragic at the same time.
A pleasure to take in. x
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That carries a stark rhythm, the triple negation (“no man shall endure nor beast”) gives it a biblical, almost covenantal tone. The phrase “monstrous loneliness” works well because it personifies isolation as something with appetite and form. Appreciate you.
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NAAJIR wrote a new post
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Your pen has power, Naajir. You weld it like a trident of discourse. Because you see that discourse and use it against itself.
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Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. This has a flow that would make great song lyrics. Nicely done per usual brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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We read this thinking of all the people now wanting to claim innocence, The supporters of Nero and Caligua who supported the emperor even after discovering their madness. The mad rulers campaign on their sickness and still found themselves in power. There is no depth to the madness, you lose yourself using the normal routes to navigate. Tight
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hello dearest Naajir man this is deep but I expect that from you you understand concepts a lot of people don’t even consider…I think for instance our poetry going over the satelites could some day find themselves transmitted through space and touch another civilization ❤️