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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Hello Me
It has been a while
You reached a plateau
traveling many milesWhat you failed to do
Is see what is occurring around youOr you’re choosing not
Not to see
Not to hear
Not to “oh my” share??Me this can not be
Your voice and thoughts need..need..To be set free
Free from the confines
Of societies vines…Read More2 Comments-
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Thank you so much;))
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I feel you on this lovely Fia I used to clam up like that when my kooky thoughts would come but I can’t hold them anymore…be yourself lady we will love you ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin. I will keep being me;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. It feels like inner dialogue to me, you and your subconscious kinda vibe. Nicely done as always. I can relate.. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, Yeah, it is inner dialogue. Sometimes I need to set myself straight. lol
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These conversations with self are some of the best. I enjoyed the way this one wove the reader into it
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Thank you willow. Yeah, sometimes sitting and just think things through of what happened or what should happen. Helps.
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This is excellent. It had some rhyme and rhythm.
Nothing felt forced at all.
Great stream of consciousness amiga:)-
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Thank you, I just let whatever I was thinking come out. thank you;))
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Sometimes its necessary to pause, reflect and take inventory. I like the honesty because we do tend to lose sight for a while until we become more aware of ourselves.
Nicely done.
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Crimsin I love how you interwoven this with politics. “Should I die also so that you may live” that is deep
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thank you beautiful Fia politics is his favored place to be…your comment made me smile also humbling me ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write that gives me Robert Johnson vibes my friend. He is involved in everything especially politics and Hollywood. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian in my thoughts I always think I was at the rebellion and I had a choice then to leave with Lucifer of be born human to be tested and die…in my mind he comes around sometimes to mock my mortality…I always answer him the same that Hollywood and Politics are his favorite places to be…for the most part these distract him but there are times he acutally struggles with thoughts I appreciate your thoughts it does remind me of a meeting at the crossroads ❤️
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It’s the journey and the mystique of your vibes that always
keep this reader enthralledMuch respect
Naaj
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hello dearest Naajir I know you may not hear him from time to time but I believe you are aware of his motive of operations…I appreciate you getting the vibe here really I was unsure if anyone would… I feel so kooky writing these but I always have to follow my pen thank you graciously ❤️
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I don’t even know where to start with this one. There’s so much depth to it, and quiet emotion that unwinds in a shout. Incredible, Brenda 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow thank you for feeling the emotion here it is indeed deep….this goes back to before the angel rebellion we all there some of us chose to born human to be tested God didn’t ever want another conflict…Lucifer feels a lot of guilt but he travels with an entourage and distracts himself in politics and Hollywood…on my end is torment knowing deep down he regrets what he did…I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Feather
A single solitary feather falls into my palm
I smile ,,,
This feather as light as it is
Made it possible to soar into the sky
To catch a current and glide
I smile ,,,
Knowing that even though I am grounded
My thoughts soar like a bird
It catches the perfect flow
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beautiful lovely Fia Styxian is a poet I admire for many reasons ❤️
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Thank you, Crimsin;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Such a lovely and hopeful write my friend. Mark (Styxian) is a guy that inspires many of us and is one hell of a writer. I like this one a lot, nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, he does cuz;))
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The imagery in this one is off the chain. Especially for how simple and short it is. Brava!
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Thank you Willow;))
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Thank you Naaj;))
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Awwww. This is so heart felt and obviously I get it!
We are a community of writers. Here to encourage and inspire.
When I first encountered Mark on DUP it took me a while to leave a comment.
His work was so good and I wanted to leave a worthy comment and I was speechless!
I finally did and our friendship grew.
It makes me proud and happy to see it’s not just me:)This write is vivid for its brevity.
Just wonderful amiga:)-
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Thank you Adel. I honestly still get a little nervous about my poetry. The writing that is posted have me taken aback and rethinking if I need to work harder at this. Thank you amiga:))
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My dear Fia, we are all writers, if not poets. We are creators, builders. That puts us in good company with the better half of humanity. Hope and kindness carries much of our personal burdens for us. So much out there wants to destroy, so we huddle at our little spots and write of renewal, in so many different ways. It really does help build our strengths, our character.
I don’t think it is a matter of working harder. I think it is more about expanding on ideas of what to write. The subjects that intrigue us, perhaps. I hope that this site continues to grow, so that we get more and more diversity of talent and expression.
You excel at this, yaknow. You have great skills for this. Because you truly do love the act of writing, yes?
We are as good as the company that we keep. You belong.-
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You are right. I will always love to write and express myself this way. The site is growing and new voices will appear. thank you Styxian;))
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Hello you, it’s just me. ;0) pretty cool poem Fia.