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Read MoreYEAR: 52028 HESHIP: Matriark II, Super-Frigate Exploration classSUPERVISORY COMPUTOR SYSTEM: Exterior Guard Drone fiveLOCATION: Nojo memorial Farms and GardensPRESENT: CORPORAL MACKINGSub-Captain Ortner’s Watch Log ORT: There falls another Hahaoyan day. The darkness grows like a fog over the dust....
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Yes. He is scared and wants the people he oversees to think he is tough. The next part (10) is going to be the last one for a while. I will come back to this story in a few months.
Thanks for reading and commenting.Regards
James
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Ooo I like this. realizing you have succumbed without touching. Nice
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hello beautiful Fia you know it when they seduce your mind and your body talks… thank you for the love ❤️
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taking its breath away with my passion to live
greeting the sour with the sweet
very powerful Crimsin Like this line alot-
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously for the love here ❤️
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Powerful and deeply raw. I love how this begins with pain almost having a personality of its own, trying to seduce the speaker into surrender, but gradually turns into a declaration of survival. “Taking its breath away with my passion to live” really stood out to me—it completely reverses who holds the power. The ending beautifully captures resilience: accepting both the sour and the sweet, yet refusing to bow. 🖤
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hello lovely poetess thank you graciously for such a giving comment…it uplifted me I was faced with my own mortality lately I didn’t know if I had the strength for a serious surgery but I did…I love life and chose to stay even given the state of things I was thinking of your poem and thinking a lot of people reason I won’t live long enough to suffer current descions but your righ our children will… beautiful work ❤️
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I don’t think he can mentally take it but he is showing on the outside that he is brave.