Initially I get the feeling of a horror movie, as though Vincent Price were inviting us into his own darkness. By the end though it feels more hellish. More sinister, and more serious. This is a dark one Crimsin.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. An excellent write with many layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

I haven’t read something that made me feel, “Wow, I feel EXACTLY like this to someone right now, nothing good could come of it, I don’t understand why I’d even draw them to me, I’ve nothing to offer, just darkness, and they’re made of light, so I’d blot them out.” This was like reading the words of my own heart, like, why, my friend, when you’re so, sooo high above me in every way would you ever want to drown in my bipolar type ii complex PTSD pit of despair! Don’t want me out of pity, you’ll regret it, and how will you ever find the Mr. Right you so deserve when you’re spending all your time and energy on the Mr. Wrong that I am?? Oh, gosh, did this ever hit me right in my chest… an amazing write, Crimsin. I feel like you snuck up to my metaphorical house and peeked in the window and saw EVERYTHING that is going on!! Crazy, but in the best sort of way!!!

Powerfully penned, Tim. Another excellent write with amazing imagery. Appreciate you.

Damian

I am sighing with the wind. this is lovely and soft

hauntingly written dearest Tim the trees know what it says ❤️

One can never cage the wind. Can’t silence it. We can cover our ears but it carries on. That’s strength and resilience there. Unstoppable. Nicely done!

We have been expecting rain all week. We get the dark clouds over head but no wind came.
The wind came today and brought the rain.
It gives you signs and warnings in its own way/voice.
Enjoyed the read!!

Here, three days of high winds, no rain. But 30 mph plus winds. It’s invigorating, except when you’re trying to sleep and stuff is moving around outside. LOL
Exceptional write, Tim. We all can relate, yet you nailed the descriptive nature of it. Excellent.

Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write with clever wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

AKA zombies. The world is tuning out more and more. Thankfully we all have us here! In a way, writing makes us leaders. Not followers. By the examples of “life” we bring in.
Awesome write, Tim.

So true. We need each other. More than ever, we need each other.

definitely more… crap… this touched me more than you think

I love it when you skip the conventional, and just flow like spilt honey all over the page, Fia – encore! x

Great use of words and rhymes. Awesome job here.

A sensual poem, written with the precision of a master key. Or should I say: Mistress key!

Passionately penned, Fia. A very seductive write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Oh damn! That’s some fierce wordplay there! You built that to perfection!