The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.

This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.

Damian

Im so sorry to hear you’re going through all of that. You want you write horror go ahead. There are a few people on here that love it.

It wouldn’t be all horror.

First reading of your predicament, super sorry to read of this. But hopefully your surgeries are successful and we get a new Paula with a totally new poetic vision.

I like steak well done, but the current steak situation…inedible, unpalatable and unacceptable. Perfectly executed

Thank you Vision:))

Well said!

For a moment we was like this is a fed up person, then this person has been flocked, nothing but sheep. Tight

Thank you Tim, for seeing that

I smell a Pavlovian steak!! Well done, Fia! “)

Mic drop, Cuz!

It’s all in the details. The little nuances that leans elegantly one direction or the other. This one takes me places

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. It’s the minute details isn’t it? Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

This is a very reflective piece.

I can sense a lot of careful concentration from the writer.

I admire the determination throughout the stanzas.

This is a dark but incredible read. x